Emotions or comotion

Poem by: DylanNewton

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I think this is what everyone feels at some point in life!

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Submitted: May 30, 2007

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Some times I feel like a bullet

Ricocheting from emotion to emotion

I haven't lived life to the fullest

And feel like I'm under a potion

The emotions are like brick walls

And I was fired at close range

They seem way too tall

And the feelings are too strange

It feels like I can't manage

It seems like I can't deal

 With all of this inflicted damage

That these things have made me feel!

If you think you have a solution

Please feel free to speak you mind

Cause this feels like a revolution

And will take it's sweet ass time

Lets break down this wall

Lets get me out of my cell

Before my guard decides to fall

Cause my demon won't yell

This maze seems like nonsense

The walls are cold and dark

I get confused as it gets more dense

As it continues to tear me apart

So please try to open your eyes

Try to see what I'm telling you

Hear all of the wines and cries

That are going right through

I haven't seen sunlight in while

There's no cracks in this cage

As the bodies continue to pile

As I turn this page

In my happy but confused life

I will always wonder

If I ever will get this feelings right

And finally be able to hear the thunder

 


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I think this is what everyone feels at some point in life!
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