Poem by: dynamic12
hope, despair, sun, clouds
Submitted: March 03, 2013
DESPAIR AND HOPE (A
Dark clouds of despair
Brightness of the sun dispels
Despair with the hope.
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Waow your not only good with poems and also haiku...
Lovely.....keep it coming
Thank you so much dear for your lovely comment. :))
Interesting, enjoyed reading this. Keep writing :-)
Thank you so much :)
Just a little modification required to be considered haiku: Total 17 syllables broken down to three lines
Line syllable is 5, 7, 5
You wrote 4, 6, 5
That's the rules. But actually it doesn't really matter. Self expression is what matters. So do it anyway you want. I just thought since it is your first I would explain the textbook way.
But your way is beautiful. This is awesome!
I'll try to modify it. You know I find it difficult to calculate the syllables within a single word and that's why the problem occurs. Any tips to know the number of syllables within a single word...
Thanks a lot for your encouraging and helpful comment. :)
A fine haiku!
Thanks a lot Mike :)
This explains how to count them. Sounds difficult though. Not sure how to put in my owm words
This one no thinking required lol. Copy and paste each line of your poem in the box. It will count them for you
Hope this is helpful. I admire trying something new. You have such awesome writing skills
So whatever you decide with the Haiku, just keep writing my friend!
Looking forward to more
Thank You so much for taking your precious time for helping me. The link you provided will be very useful for writing more Haiku. I don't have words how to thank you dear....So I guess Plain and simple thanks will have to do with a smile :)
You're welcome, anytime :)
IMAD UL ISLAM
Good.. I believe when all the three lines rhyme it reads good.. Nice attempt.. Keep penned dear friend :)
Thanks a lot, Imad for reading and giving your opinion. It means a lot to me :)
zohara ummey hassan
So lovely !
This is like Shannan Browne's haiku "almost a Haiku"... interesting! Cool words Miss L
Thanks a lot :)
liked it a lot!!
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