I Like Smile

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: True Confessions  |  House: Booksie Classic

I Like Smile....For more Read and Find out.

I LIKE SMILE

I like smile,

It keeps you happy all the while,

It’s an evergreen style,

’Cause there’s some magic in a smile.

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Baby’s smile full of innocent bloom;

Blushing one of bride and groom;

Naughty smile of toddlers wild;

Mischievous one of playful child.

smiley

Affectionate smile of dad and mom;

Smile of neighbors’ on friendly term;

Virtual smile on the internet

So pervasive when friends are on chat.

smiley

Fake smile of glamour dolls;

Bashful smile when girl trip and falls;

Professional one of news-reader in frame;

Magnetic one of actress with envious fame.

smiley

I like smile,

A universal language known till date;

As universal as love and hate,

For it’s effect mysterious and so great.

smiley

I like smile,

For it keeps you happy all the while

And there’s nothing winsome than a smile

So I like smile.

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Submitted: March 16, 2013

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hafsa91

awesome as usual,u r v v v gud poet,mashallah.

Sat, March 16th, 2013 12:45pm

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Thank you so much for your lovely comment. I'm glad that you liked it. :)

Sat, March 16th, 2013 5:51am

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thumblina

Lovely........

I liked the usage of words and rhyming....

Keep it coming.....

Sat, March 16th, 2013 12:53pm

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Thanks a million dear for your encouraging and kind words of appreciation.

Sat, March 16th, 2013 6:05am

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ashi17

Lovely poem with beautiful imagery amd smilies. Enjoyed reading it, Good work. KEEP WRITING :))

Sat, March 16th, 2013 12:55pm

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I'm so happy that you liked it. Thanks a lot for your kind appreciation of my work.

Sat, March 16th, 2013 5:59am

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ShimmerShine

awww! so beautiful! loved the imagery, rhythm anf flow of the poem... always have loved your way of describing things in a sweet and light manner... your writings are complete perfection for me... and whenever i write, i keep in focus your sweet poems... you are a GREAT poet!

Keep it up...:)

Sat, March 16th, 2013 3:00pm

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Thank you, thank you sooo much for your amazing comment. :)

Sat, March 16th, 2013 9:57am

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zohara ummey hassan

Very beautiful ! You have pointed out all types of smiles. Actually the real smile can change the heart, the world !

Sat, March 16th, 2013 3:03pm

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Thanks a lot. Your comment actually brought smile on my face :)

Sat, March 16th, 2013 10:04am

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Ashley I Read

Awesome poem about a simple subject, but stretched so far to create something so good. Good work! :)

Sat, March 16th, 2013 3:47pm

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Thanks for the awesome comment :)

Sat, March 16th, 2013 10:08am

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ValeriyaPonomar

Amazing! They say a smile a human's most powerful tool when it comes to many things.
The flow was great and so was the meaning it pointed out. Sorry if that doesn't make any sense.
:)

Sat, March 16th, 2013 4:17pm

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Thanks a million for appreciating my work. No need to be sorry dear, you were spot on! Keep smiling :)

Sat, March 16th, 2013 10:10am

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BUnique

A lovely poem about a smile.

I love to see smiles they make my day, aspecially my daughters haha

A lovely lovely lovely poem!! :-D

Sat, March 16th, 2013 6:48pm

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I'm glad you also like smile and to be frank there would hardly anyone who doesn't like smile.

Thanks for your lovely feedback :)

Sat, March 16th, 2013 10:15pm

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WhisperMyFairytale

Thanks for inviting me! I'm so glad that I got a chance to read your wonderful poetry; you're a brilliant poet! So well done.

I liked all of your poem, but the last second stanza was just perfect! Loved it. Your choices of words are beautiful MaShaa'Allah.

I feel guilty of asking, but could you please do me a favour? Can you please read any of my work? Any feedback would be really appreciated! Thank you if you can. :)

Sun, March 17th, 2013 12:09am

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Thanks a million for honoring my reading request and placing such a wonderful and enriching comment. I'm glad your like it.

Sure, I'll definitely go through your work and give feedback.

Sat, March 16th, 2013 10:06pm

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thumblina

I dont care if your mRried or not gift .....but i care if you reck mine and my booksie family's peace of mind ......soo Ohhhhhh stop creating spam on my work and others accounts....this is a very peaceful website,so stop it you fake fake fake freak.....

Sun, March 17th, 2013 2:51am

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Ya...the comment from "Giftmbia" is spam and the profile is also fake. I've blocked the user.

Thanks for being so considerate and caring. I appreciate your concern.

Sat, March 16th, 2013 9:34pm

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Lisa Ayers

Absolutely lovely, enjoyed everything about this :)

Sun, March 17th, 2013 3:27am

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Thanks :)

Sat, March 16th, 2013 9:05pm

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BrokenPrincess

really awsome..loved it..truly heart touching..:)

Sun, March 17th, 2013 7:22am

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Thank You :)

Sun, March 17th, 2013 12:33am

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Vasanthi Papu

Huge hit!U have made us know the different kinds of smiles.. Very aptly related to the person mentioned..
"A smile happens in a flash, but its memory can last a lifetime". Ur poem on 'smile' has left a lasting impression in my mind.

Sun, March 17th, 2013 11:52am

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Thanks a million for such a wonderful comment. You are right memory of smile does last a lifetime.

Sun, March 17th, 2013 6:05am

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KatyLee

Thanks for suggesting this to me, it was really good:) You are really successful at creating imagery in your words! If you would return the favour and read some of my work, it would be much appreciated!:)

Sun, March 17th, 2013 6:34pm

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Thank you very much for your valuable comment Katy.
Sure, I will go through your work. :)

Sun, March 17th, 2013 8:59pm

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Christian Taylor

Reminds of a lyric from a song,

When you're smiling,
When you're smiling,
The whole world smiles with you...

This poem reminds me that when you smile...everyone else around you wants to smile with you. Great poem! Loved it!

Mon, March 18th, 2013 3:41am

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Thanks a lot for taking time out to read and post your valuable feedback. I'm glad you loved this poem :)

Sun, March 17th, 2013 8:57pm

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PizzaPoet

I really like the flow of this. I've never really stopped and thought about how many different reasons there are to smile. Very good work! :)

Mon, March 18th, 2013 4:42am

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Thanks so much for stopping by and reading and providing your precious comment. I'm really happy that you liked it. :)

Sun, March 17th, 2013 10:15pm

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Shama998

I really like this it is Amazing I'd love to read it a hundrend times.. But I have never tried to smile at my sadness times or moments Cuz it's so hard I know I'll never be happy if I couldn't smile at my hard times thanks for let me read your work Cuz you know I love your works so much

Mon, March 18th, 2013 8:10pm

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It is indeed difficult to smile in hard times.

Thanks a million for liking this poem so much!! :)

Tue, March 19th, 2013 3:42am

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JoelatRpg

Wow! You had tons of creative wording in this poem, and the syllable rhythm was perfect! You had in there that the effect was mysterious, I totally agree. Good job and thanks for sharing:)

Mon, March 18th, 2013 9:23pm

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Thanks a lot for your appreciation. I'm glad you liked it. :)

Tue, March 19th, 2013 3:39am

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FrootLoop246

That was really good!!! I really enjoyed reading your poem!!! I am not a poet but I thought it was great!! :)

Wed, March 20th, 2013 6:19pm

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Thanks a billion for reading and finding this poem enjoyable. Thanks :)

Wed, March 20th, 2013 9:24pm

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praveen gola

A 100% Cheerful Smile from my side.....no doubt ur creations are also very good.

Thu, March 21st, 2013 12:55pm

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Thanks a lot for taking time to read and provide your valuable feedback on my work. I appreciate it. :)

Thu, March 21st, 2013 6:06am

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