Poem by: dynamic12
life, soul, haiku, pollution, water, purity, rivers, lakes, impure
Submitted: April 17, 2013
Impure Life (Haiku)
Water is called Life
Rivers, lakes are polluted
How can life be pure?
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Thought provoking !
Very nice haiku! The thought that occurs to me, though, is that just how water can be distilled of its impurities, so can life. But, like everything, its a process. Nice work, dynamic!
Thanks for such a nice comment, Mr. Colin David!!
Nice! Deep thought and syllable perfect.
Thanks a lot, dear!!
Green signal from the poet with great understanding in Haiku is well appreciated. Thanks :D .
I like. I teach Haiku to my junior high kids. They took the word polluted and ran with it.
If pollution of every kind is taken out from our lives, I'm sure our our lives would be much pure. I'm glad you liked this haiku. Thanks for your nice comment. :)
very nice thought.
Thanks a lot :)
I don't get haikus-sorry, haha-but I like this...it's pretty thougtful! :D Good job! :D
Thanks a lot for reading this Haiku and placing your comment. I really appreciate it. :)
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