MY MOTHER (Acrostic Poem)
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Poem by: dynamic12
MY MOTHER (Acrostic Poem)
My first ever friend is undoubtedly you,
Your loving heart, no doubt bigger than blue.
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Most valuable treasure on the entire earth,
Oceans’ all pearls can’t even value your worth.
The priceless treasure of love, feeling and affection;
Heart of gold inside you, full of selfless devotion.
Every time I’m blessed whenever you pray;
Repaying debt of your sacrifices is no child’s play.
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This is beautiful! Your each and every word is so touching. You describe a mother's love and actions so effortlessly...great work Dynamic12! Very very impressive! I am sure your mother is proud of you...
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I'm glad that you loved this piece. Thanks for the kind words of appreciation for this poem too. :)
"Mother" is the topic which always makes me speechless and whenever I picks my pen my minds goes blank and I feel difficult to describe her in words. I tried to convey my feelings through colours in one of my painting....
I am glad you did great job in it, this is very beautiful poem, I wish I could write such piece.......
Good work Dynamic, all the best for your future endeavours!
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Thank you so much. By the way I could write this poem because you wanted me to compose a poem on 'Mother' so I tried. I'm extremely happy that I could deliver according to your liking.
Thanks once again for pushing me to the limits so as to bring the best out of me.
it's beautiful, I only wish that I could write about my mother the way that you do yours.
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Thank you. I feel mother is a very special person in everyone's life. She is always with us throughout our good times or bad. She shows us the right path. :))
Such a beautiful poem. Makes me realize that many of us do not appreciate our mothers as much as we should.
I am glad to have read it, as it reminded me about what is important in my life.
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Yep...absolutely right. We sometimes don't give as much love to our mothers as she deserves. That's what the last line of the poem stands for.
Thanks for accepting my reading request and giving your precious thought on the poem :)
Really really love it this time it isn't just GREAT It is PERFECT b'cause MOM is a word I can't discribe it But you did that perfectly I'm really glad that I read this it is make me happy make me remind my memories with my mom even it was helpful b'cause I read that to my mom too she really liked it
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Ohh..I'm so happy that even you mom liked my poem. It feels great to me now.
Thanks dear for always giving your priceless feedback on my work. It means a lot to me :))
I really liked it but didn't quite understand the second line - maybe work on that a little to make it flow better? Great job anyway x
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The 2nd line meant that the love in my mother's heart is so much that it is even bigger/larger than sky. Blue = sky.I hope now you got the meaning of the 2nd line.
Thanks for your valuable feedback. :)
Loved it! Completely true, but didn't really get the second line. It flowed well and is sweet. Good job! :D
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In the 2nd line, blue stands for sky and I compared my mother's loving heart with the sky, which has more love than the size of the sky. I hope I'm able to explain what 2nd line meant.
Thanks for providing your honest and precious opinion on the poem :))
Would be lovely if everyone felt this way about their mom.
You composed a touching tribute. i'm sure your mom would be proud.
This is beautiful
Keep it up!
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Frankly speaking I still haven't showed this poem to my mom. I feel that I should not earn any brownie point for writing the simple truth. I don't want to get a special treatment from her. This is so simple thing and as far as I think all the mother's might be like her only.
I don't know after reading the comments here, whether I should show this poem to her or not..... it's confusing!!
Thanks, Ms. Lisa for being regular follower of my work and providing your valuable thoughts. I appreciate your feedback. It really keeps me charged up!!
nice poem,no doubt that mother's love is without any purpose.well written,mr.dynamic
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So late in commenting....I'm angry with you now....ok just joking :D
Your comments are always cute and loving. Thanks for being a big fan of my work. I appreciate it :))
forgot 2 like it,liked it now,hunh angry,m angry,u informed me late,acha g.chalo ab mje manayein.
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Thanks for the LIKE. Hey...when u fanned me u haven't ticked automatic updates for my work. Doesn't matter may be saayad aap se pehle aur readers ne comments de diye.... but I don't mind all my fans are equally important to me. :))
Sooooo beautiful!!!! I don't think I could ever put into words how much my mother means to me, but your poem comes quite close!!! :)
I loved this!!! :)
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Thanks a million for all the admiration for my poem. I'm glad you loved it :))
I forwarded this to my Mom :')
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I hope she likes this one. Thanks :)
Hi friend :)
In response to your response:
Not all mothers are like that. A couple comments reflect that. So you and others with a mother like that are blessed.
I think it's less about earning brownie points and more about expressing and showing her how you truly feel. Sometimes we tend to wait until it's to late.
I'm assuming your Mom is aware you are a writer. I believe she would be very proud to read this.
You're not sure if you should share this according to the comments. Well let's see :) Let's go through:
Comment by several readers....they said it is beautiful. Other comments were great and perfect. Two others said they have difficulty putting the description of their Mom in words. Something you effortlessly accomphlished.
Another reader read it to her mother and another forwarded it to her mother.
So I encourage you present it to your Mother. Either as itself or presented as a gift with a frame or beautiful picture. If you do not know how to do the photo editing, I can help. Or there ae so many talented artist on here that I'm sure they would be willing to help.
Bottom Line: Don't wait until it's to late. Expresse and show your Mom how you feel .
I'm glad you keep charged! Stay plugged in my dear!
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Now that you came here again and tried to dispel my confusion. I think you are right. Sometimes in hesitation it may be late and we may feel sorry about that. So I will show this poem to my mom.
Thanks dear for your valuable advice and continued support. I appreciate it.
umm actually i marked that but i dnt check my mail box,lolz.bt it feels gud na when u say plz read and post ur valuable coment,i knw u post this msg to every one bt ab samaj jye na m nt gud with words.
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Ya....sab samajh a gaya...But don't worry I'll KMU always. OK.
A beautiful representation of the love a mother deserves to have! you made me think of my mother, and my relationship with her. Lovely work!
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Thanks a lot for your lovely comment :))
hahahahaha,acha KMU kia ha
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Keep Me Updating ka short form hai...samjh aaya abh.
Good! I'm excited to know her reaction if that's alright!
She is going to love it and cry :)
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My mom loved it. There is a classic and very popular bollywood movie titled "Mother India". She said that my poem reminded her of that movie.
Oh.. The words uh used to describe ua feelings were so beautiful. I wish if this poem was a li'l more big so as to i could enjoy..mORE.. Cz when i started reading , i was lost in the poem entirely and when it stopped suddenly i thought as when we watch a latest movie on t.v and the climax had just begin.. When the light goes off".. You knw what i mean.. Lol i understand ACROSTIC POEM! .. I hope uh undrstn my funny prblm.. Cuz i really loved this poem! BEAUTIFUL WORK.. :)
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Don't worry I like humor and in fact I'm often misunderstood by my friends for being too witty.
It's my honor that you liked my poem so much. I really appreciate it. Thanks a lot :)
You used only few lines with few words to describe one of the toughest topic and I think you did it in a very good way.
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You are right, this indeed is the toughest topic because you can write novel on mother still you'll feel you've covered only 1% of it.
Moreover,I wanted it to be an Acrostic Poem which is completely new for me and here I've tried it for the first time while retaining the inherent qualities of a basic poem. I hope I did justice on that department. So it was a bit of a challenge to say so much with a very few words.
Thanks, IMAD for your encouraging comment :)
aho g aa gya samaj
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:)
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