Reoccurring Memories

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

An Enigma of Memories

Reoccurring Memories

 

You and I are now poles apart

You are happy in your life

And I’m happy in mine

We are now independent and fine.

~

But your memories - sour and sweet

Became indispensable like heartbeat

Past couldn’t lead into a fulfilling future

Unless present is what you cherish and nurture

~

There was no point living in the past

No point getting stuck as world was moving fast

However sweet, memories bring emptiness

Our longing lead to perpetual unhappiness

~

So I had to let it go, to move ahead in life

To conquer peace, defeating the prime reason of my strife

It was really hard but somehow I overcame

To an extent of forgetting even your name

~

Then what’s still left that you keep haunting me

Refreshing all memories through dreams that I see

Is it a boon or some kind of a bane?

- An enigma that’s gonna definitely make me insane.

 

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Submitted: December 11, 2014

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Becca Swan

This is a very good poem, I applaud you.

Sat, December 13th, 2014 5:25am

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Thank you, Becca swan !! :)

Sat, December 27th, 2014 10:16pm

artie1947

oh' such emotion, such hart ache, love is the only thing in the world that can bring down the biggest and bravest person, it wont let go till it is finished with you. great piece of work.

Sat, December 13th, 2014 11:38am

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Thanks a million, sir for giving your valuable time reading and placing your encouraging feedback. Happy New Year!!

Sat, December 27th, 2014 10:11pm

LeeSchneider

I admire your poem. It has strong feelings and verse flows marvelously.I was really inspired by your poem.
You are talented and wonderful person. Lee.

Sat, December 13th, 2014 3:52pm

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Thank you so much Lee for your wonderful words of appreciation. I'm extremely Happy you liked my poem. Happy New Year in advance. have a wonderful year ahead.

Sat, December 27th, 2014 10:09pm

Amy Furzane

This is good. Great work! :)

Sat, December 13th, 2014 11:25pm

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Thank you Amy!! :)

Sat, December 27th, 2014 10:06pm

ashi17

Emotional conflicts of a lover is very well depicted in this poem. Remarkable thing is you kept hold on balancing of words and rhyming till the end....
Brilliant piece of work!!!

Sun, December 14th, 2014 7:00pm

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Thank you Ms. Ashi17 for your precious comment. :)

Sat, December 27th, 2014 10:02pm

angelique30

The motions and heartache in this poem was brought out very well and was marvelously written. This is really a great piece :) Thank you for sharing it with me

Mon, December 15th, 2014 5:49am

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Thank you so much for appreciating my poem. I'm glad you liked it. :)

Sat, December 27th, 2014 10:01pm

quetzala

o gosh I can relate to this
very good poem as always

Mon, December 29th, 2014 5:30pm

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Thanks a lot. I'm glad you like it. :)

Sun, January 25th, 2015 8:55pm

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