Demon

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Song Lyrics  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is sort of something that happened to me. please comment, this is my first song so it won't be that well. I'd appreciate your advice.

I can see you looking at me like I'm some demon

Asked me to give you another chance, you must be dreamin'

Every time you said 'I love you' you were lyin'

Cuz you wouldn't care if I was dyin'

You thought you could get rid of me

But now I'm comin back...AND I"M LOOKING FOR SOME PAYBACK!

So you better run,run,run

Cuz I'm coming after you, gonna get revenge if it's.The.Last.Thing.I.DO!

I hate everything about you!

You played the card of humiliation and now I'm playing the card of retaliation.

So you better run,run,run

Cuz I'm comin' after you, gonna get revenge if it's the last thing I do!!!


Submitted: December 04, 2014

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Tiffanyyy25

I love this!! I read it like a song. Im new on this and i am so thankful you became my fan(: Your are a great writer keep up the amazing tips. Also if you know of any tips for me
i would love to here!

Sun, December 7th, 2014 1:16am

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Thank you (:

Sat, December 6th, 2014 7:16pm

Comgree

Very cool song lyrics, it reminds me of a song I wrote titled "Goody Goody". Also keep in mind that forced rhyming doesn't always work in your favor.

Sun, December 7th, 2014 3:49am

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Yeah, it doesn't. Thank you.

Sat, December 6th, 2014 7:54pm

jctolliver

Very cool! I think the chorus needs to be a little longer. How about, "I am so done, done, done,
so you better run, run, run?

My sister sings and I am getting ready to post a song I wrote for her, please take a look when it's posted. It's call, "Please, won't you sing me a song?"

Keep up the good work. Do you play an instrument?

Mon, December 15th, 2014 11:40pm

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Thank you. Yes, I play the drums.

Mon, December 15th, 2014 3:59pm

jctolliver

Please check out my very short story, "Woman in the Closet", I think you would like it.

Tue, December 16th, 2014 3:54am

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Okay

Tue, December 16th, 2014 3:22am

Angie Blake

Nicely written. I read it like a song too! Even though, you never should get revenge we all have, at least once felt like we've wanted to.

Sat, May 16th, 2015 4:14am

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Thank you, I never did get revenge.

Mon, May 18th, 2015 1:47pm

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