I Wonder How I feel

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is a poem to a girl. Please comment

Sometimes I wonder how I feel about you,
Scared of these feelings because it's still new
I catch myself thinking of the best way to share,
Hoping you'll return my confession showing you care
And then I catch myself again... and drag my thoughts back to reality
I am back at square one, does this just happen to me?

Some say poems are so stupid I swear I would never do this
But this is YOU, and you aren't like anyone I have met
How much longer do I have to write, can I tell you yet?
When I come back from my thoughts I feel more secure
But then I sleep... and the dreams of you occur

The dreams I have of you are so vivid and clear
I feel TRUE happiness inside and that there is nothing to fear
People say dreams have underlying meanings and not to ignore them
I say we both know what they mean and now I want you to hear
Hear what I am about to say to you, feel it with my body, see it in my face
Hear it in my words and tone when we converse

I love you! I love you more than I ever thought I could
Be with me always and be loved like you should

 


Submitted: December 22, 2014

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natalayaevans

That definitely is great. Loved it. Great job.

Mon, December 22nd, 2014 4:31pm

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Thank you

Tue, December 23rd, 2014 12:06pm

Labyrinth Black

It sounds a bit like a song. If you added a tune to it, you could have a hit withit! Brilliant!

Wed, December 24th, 2014 12:04pm

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Thank you

Wed, December 24th, 2014 6:44am

Jacob Griffin

Sweet poem, you should say it to her.

Thu, January 15th, 2015 10:37pm

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Thank you

Thu, January 15th, 2015 2:43pm

Criss Sole

So beautiful. I'd certainly love to have a guy write me a poem like this. It was romantic and made me smile. Very well written.

Tue, January 20th, 2015 8:35am

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Thank you

Tue, January 20th, 2015 3:37am

Emera Kat

Wow. Amazing. The feelings are so beautiful, sweet and pure. If a guy presented this with me I would definitely fall for him. I love the rhythm and rhyme, and it's very very well written.
Great job!

Mon, February 23rd, 2015 7:55am

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Thank you :)

Mon, February 23rd, 2015 1:49pm

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