Why Did I Fall In Love With You?

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

She broke my heart poem.

You said you loved me

And I believed it

Because I was a fool

For your love


Could I get any stupider?

I thought we were in-love...

But I guess to you

I was worthless than a dime...

But I treated you like gold

I saw you as a diamond

I made sure to keep you safe

In my arms


But I guess that,

You were never really there

Why weren't you there?

Why weren't you there in my arms?

Why was I a fool?

But most importantly...

Why did I fall in-love with you...?

Submitted: December 18, 2014

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Maggie Williams

Great job!!:) this poem was like an opposite to your other poem:)

Thu, December 18th, 2014 2:53pm


Thank you.

Fri, December 19th, 2014 3:25am

Criss Sole

Many of us have been in that situation. Love is blind and makes fools out of us sometimes. I like how you reflected on that. Very well written.

Sat, December 20th, 2014 6:30am


Thank you :)

Sat, December 20th, 2014 2:50pm


I like it when authors can write about their true feelings. It frees us somehow.

Sun, December 21st, 2014 3:31am


Yeah, it does.

Sun, December 21st, 2014 4:27pm

Jacob Griffin

I could feel the anger, good job.

Wed, February 25th, 2015 4:05pm


Thank you

Wed, February 25th, 2015 8:27am

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