tell me how tell me when

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Young Adult  |  House: Booksie Classic

you tell me

daylight breacks and i begin to wonder

how life can be so odd as to the fact i never know what to do

so tell me what to do today and lets get going

you make the plans and i'll proivde the way

and as we move i will sing you song and forever

i shall keep you by my side

oh hold me close and never let me go

let me hear that song of yours just once more

oh baby can't you see that my life flows for thee

so tell me when and where and i shall meet

you provide the dream and i shall follow it through

for how my heart aches for you

for every night i dream

it is of you and my moring thoughts continue

oh how i don't want this song to end

for it gose on all day and night

oh baby please don't let me go

for without you i would not be

Submitted: September 10, 2008

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Wow, poetic. I love it, of course. I guess my comments are getting pretty redundant, but I will continue until you write something I don't like.

Wed, September 10th, 2008 1:19am


lol ok that's cool and it dosn't bother me

Tue, September 9th, 2008 6:27pm

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