Poem by: Ekeuhie
Submitted: June 22, 2011
with the sun on my face. and the moon at my wake, All i ever craved was an epitaph fire framed
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Short but meaningful. :)
Oh my God!!! Thanks Alazae for your sweet comment:) i just want to say you made my day,and hey--i owe you one:)
SHORT and SWEET!!! SMALL lines but they COVEY the BIGGEST!!! GREAT WORK!!! KEEP IT UP :-D
Most thoughts, if expressed by someone who has been "seasoned" spiritually, only need a line or two--sometimes just a word or two--to sum up the depth of a powerful idea or desire. I take it you have been spiritually seasoned.
Hmmmm.... Gideon you are simply awesome. Oh my God... Am humbled. Thank you,thank you,thank you
Lovely, meaningful words.... Pat
Powerful positive words
Aces Wild Detroit
i like that one to, it was really cool even though it was short. nice job.
Am honored, Sire Knight. You made my day. Pls post something soon and I promise to revenge the comment. My regards to Mummy.
Very little but full of thought and feelings. It sort of tells a story of it's own. You just have to read in between the lines. I love it. POSITIVE SHORT and WONDERFUL.
becoming a fan
-Mary Josephine Davison Gould
(AKA Mary Jo)
Its such an honour,Lady Mary Jo. Thanks for the in-between-the line comment. Am glad you think my poem is wonderful and am pleased to meet your acquitance
Again, short but very POWERFUL WORDS!!
Thanks Biya dear. I'll reciprocate this kind gesture. I'll checkout your work.
Standing by the saying 'brevity is the soul of wit'!!!
Absolutely stunning writ.
Thanks Indian. A saying goes that he that does not live for something is not fit to live at all. I wanna die for course. I wanna burn out for God. I wanna die for the lost. I want to live for the cross. Arun what are you living for. This is the big question for today
This poem pulls me in, i seem to always want to read it, it inspires me in so many ways! I wish I had time to say all things I wish to say, to do all the things i wish to do.
But My heart is a burning fire,
it used to be a light so large
it was a glow,
now it is dim,
and running low,
all that lights my small fire
from a glow to a flame
are the few people in life
I know my time is running low
My burn out point is so near
i know I am growing cold.
I am dieing out
in heart and soul,
and soon in
mind and body as well...
Death is ice,
Life is fire,
I am stuck
Love you Mary Jo
This is the poem I read when I am feeling down, the poem I turn to.
short but soooooo awesome, love it, very special to follow each day!
You are just too much, Vincey. Your words are so generous and I appreciate every drop.
Short, sweet, amazing.
How? How can you say so much in just those few lines?
Thank you for sharing my dear.
I must say, I am officially a fan!
Bear Hugs coming your way Abbie. Your words set my soul on fire. You do inspire me. You comments are really amazing. Thank you, hun.
Proof that a lot can be said in few words! Lovely!
Thank you so very much, Hun, thanks a million. Have you heard about the Haiku? Its the bomb.
wow ... small words but very powerful ones .... I am a tad bit greedy and so would have liked it if you could have continued some more .. but anyways , you have done a good job with this too ... I like how your thoughts flow into all your poems .. nice work :)
Bravo! you made me speechless now!
I love that you said so much in so little. Powerful piece.
Nice to meet you :)
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