i can't over him...ughh

I told myself I was done crying over you.

But I guess that wasn't really true.

You say it's over and I know,

But I never want to let you go.

It's not gonna happen. I'm not strong enough.

They all say “Everyone goes through this stuff.”

If that's true, why am I taking it so bad?

You're just so you, and its making me sad.

What should I do to stop this now?

I need you to tell me exactly how.

I'm lost and confused. Alone and upset.

I love you, but I need to let you go and yet.


I can't stop my thinking. I NEED to find,


Just stop and say,

I don't have to feel this way.

But I do...

Because I simply can't get over you.

Submitted: June 28, 2009

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Christine Chapman

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! I know how you feel! It sucks! Beautifully written poem!

Sun, June 28th, 2009 9:51pm


This is so beautiful and I so know how you feel !
As I was reading this, I pictured it in my head as a song that someone was singing.. you should really try and write songs because you're clearly good at rhyming and connecting things and expressing your emotions.. so why not? Just a suggestion :)

Anyways though, REALLY good job. I like this, mostly because I relate to it but whatever!

Check out my writing :)

Mon, June 29th, 2009 5:46am

Brooklynne Timbers

Awww ,i know how youu feeel
? x

Mon, June 29th, 2009 7:47am

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