You Hurt Me

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

I love him.

I was in love with what you said,
Nothing could erase the things that you put in my head.
I was in love with who you were,
The things they said only made me want you more.
I believed in you like you were the one and only
Too bad I got so attached because it has just left me cold and lonely.

You probably see my pain when you look into my eyes,
You don't feel the same, which is no surprise,
It could have been something great, but there was nothing stopping you,
From moving on and going away to do what you had to do.
I keep telling myself maybe we still have a chance together,
But deep inside I know its over forever and ever.

It's time I move on and find someone new
But half of me is saying “You still love him don't you?”
The other half is telling me its over say goodbye,
Which side do I pick? I do love him don't I?
Maybe one day he will decide to love me too,
What if by then I've moved on, what would I do?

I miss him already my mind is exploding
I just want to fall into his arms fully knowing
Now I am shaking and crying all alone in my head
Under the covers clinging to the words he said.
Why did he leave? I want him here.
He would be able to put an end to this irrational fear.

The room is getting smaller and I did something wrong
He shouldn't have left our love was too strong....
Frustration and anger fill up my mind
While the missing pieces of my heart try to hide
This has caused me so much pain and sadness
But we had so many good times, so much gladness

I'll keep these bad thoughts tucked away
No one will hear the things I have to say
They will leave me alone and stop asking if I'm okay
I love him so much that I've about had it these days
I need him more than ever now...
He is the only one who can lay this down.

Submitted: June 26, 2009

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love it! I felt the same way with my ex-bf! Great job!

Fri, June 26th, 2009 4:57am


that was very good

Fri, June 26th, 2009 5:18am


omg, aamazing. i love the parts where u write about the conflicts inside ur head of moving on r not bc u still love him. :D

Fri, June 26th, 2009 6:44am

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