when you lose the one you love
Poem by: Elizabeth Smit
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When you lose
the one you love
words limeted to grieve
it feels like a part of you has died
it is pain
beyond
believe
When you lose
the one you love
your sorow is beyond tears
your joy long gone
faded away
into the darkness
along with his shadowy grave
he will be in my memories
he will be in my heart
oneday we will meet again
when I also part
with this world of the dark
I will not forget him
I will surely not
our love wil live on
in my heart.
Submitted: November 03, 2012
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EdwardJBradleySr
Elizabeth Smit:
Tue, November 6th, 2012 5:31amInteresting, heartfelt, imaginative, well written and presented. Sincerely positive emotions well expressed.
Gave it an "I Like It" vote. As with your other postings. All well deserved.
If you apply to become a fan, I'll gladly add you.
Happy Veterans' Day,
Ed Bradley.
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Thank you so much it means allot. =) And Happy Veterans' Day to you two*
Tue, November 6th, 2012 4:53am