A sad but truthful poem about everlasting love.

When you lose

the one you love

words limeted to grieve 

it feels like a part of you has died

it is pain




When you lose

the one you love

your sorow is beyond tears

your joy long gone

faded away

into the darkness 

along with his shadowy grave


he will be in my memories

he will be in my heart

oneday we will meet again

when I also part

with this world of the dark


I will not forget him

I will surely not

our love wil live on

in my heart.



Submitted: November 03, 2012

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Elizabeth Smit:

Interesting, heartfelt, imaginative, well written and presented. Sincerely positive emotions well expressed.

Gave it an "I Like It" vote. As with your other postings. All well deserved.

If you apply to become a fan, I'll gladly add you.

Happy Veterans' Day,

Ed Bradley.

Tue, November 6th, 2012 5:31am


Thank you so much it means allot. =) And Happy Veterans' Day to you two*

Tue, November 6th, 2012 4:53am

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