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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic

a bit creepy, but aren't we all ?

 

 

Souls will wither in the dark,

taken young from down the park.

Just hear the screams from family,

'oh please bring back my baby'

 

But no, they'll stay right here with me,

they're my new playthings now you see.

Eventually though they'll learn to relish,

making other people perish.

 

Then you'll see how wrong you were,

all you thought to teach them was just dirt.

Now i'll raise them up to be just like me,

What murder masterminds they will be!

 

 


Submitted: April 05, 2012

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twinkletoes

Creeply awsome

Thu, April 5th, 2012 12:56pm

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Thanks twinkletoes ( by the way you misplelled both those words ;)

Mon, April 9th, 2012 6:24am

Fannie

Very creepy, but nice use of words!
Write on,~Fannie

Thu, April 5th, 2012 1:08pm

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THANKS :-)

Mon, April 9th, 2012 6:21am

CrayzeeClaire

Love it :3 Sounds like a good idea too; steal children and raise them up to be awesome chav-hating people :o ^_^

Thu, April 5th, 2012 2:34pm

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Hell Yeah, I might just do that!!! And thanks man

Mon, April 9th, 2012 6:14am

writersbug

Quite a new turn on kidnapping, I liked it.

Sun, April 8th, 2012 1:55pm

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Aww thanks, that's what I was going for :)

Mon, April 9th, 2012 6:10am

Haihai

Ha, I really liked this, creepy or not. It's nicely written and just good. Good work. :)

Thu, April 26th, 2012 1:23pm

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thankyou very much :)

Fri, May 4th, 2012 6:14am

Ian Dawn

I love your creepy its just amazing, I think I have found an apprentice. lol Awsome job I love your work so far. Jmurch will love you to I will tell him now.

Sun, June 3rd, 2012 12:59am

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ahh thankyou, i will get round to checking out your stuff too i promise :)

Fri, September 7th, 2012 2:30am

jmurch

...and he does! This was diabolically scary! I somehow found weird scary movie noises ringing in my head! You have found the elusive key to placing a storyline into your poetry. I think a certain favorite musician would find this stuff very...VERY...freakin' scary. I picture this horribly diabolical character snagging children to avenge years of bullying by snagging an army of childrens to fight the war of evil. Poetry does not always scare me,ever...but...You are appearing to be the master of poetic horror!

Sun, June 3rd, 2012 2:53pm

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Thankyou indeed, very high praise i appreciate it :) xx

Sun, September 16th, 2012 7:35am

Brian W

Althou creepy this is really good...Nice flow and rhyme I enjoyed the read

Mon, September 17th, 2012 4:16am

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awh thankyou, i'm glad you enjoyed it xxxx

Wed, September 19th, 2012 3:33am

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