Depression can take over your life

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

Dealing with death can be a hard thing but no one should have to do what this girl has done.

This story is COMPLETE fiction and I just decided to write it because I am going through a rough time in my life, and its a way to let out my sadness

I herd my stomach grumbling as I was trudging to school on that dark and rainy day. I don't eat much since the death and it's been really hard for dad and I. I just don't feel hungry anymore even though my stomach is empty it feels no need for food. I was listening to my ipod while entering the school gates. As soon as the thought of mum popped into my head, that song came on, the song that mum used to sing to me when I was a kid and i couldn't get to sleep. My stomach turned when I herd it and I burst out in tears.

During school I couldn't concentrate and I couldn't stop thinking of her. We were so close and now that one person that had their own problems in life had to go and shoot her. They had nothing against her because she was one of the most caring person I have ever met and I will never forgive myself for letting her take the shot for me. I was the one that was supposed to die and save everyone the trouble, but then she went and jumped in front of that bullet and risked her own life for mine.

Me and dad just can't deal with the hurt and sadness so we have both agreed to meet at the old bridge near home and go join mum. School finished and I said nothing to anyone, it's better they don't know so they don't try and stop us.

Me and dad met at the centre of the bridge, the same place mum got shot and under the pouring rain we gripped each others hands tightly and stepped up onto ledge, dad counted to three,


Then we jumped, it was the most exhilarating experience of my life because it felt like I was flying. It felt like I was floating in a pool of complete oblivion for a couple of seconds then I felt the hard SMACK on my stomach and shortly after I herd dads. After that it was all darkness except for the screams of others above on the bridge. I felt the depurate need for breath but I didn't give in, I was going to a better place…a place with mum.

Submitted: November 09, 2009

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amazing babe, sad, but amazing
really well written
love you xx

Fri, November 20th, 2009 7:39am

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