My Man

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

person you love

You are my man,

You I never want,

 to leave,

You are my man,

It is the best dream of all I see,

You are my love,

My future husband,

My life partner,

My soul mate,

You are my fiancé,

My love my everything,

You are my shining star,

The light in my eyes,

The kiss on my lips and,

The thorn on the rose I hold before,

You’re the light in my eyes,

The shines on my world and,

The moon that lets it rests,

Youre the soil around me that,

Keeps me from falling and,

The water that keeps me alive,

You are my world.


Submitted: July 15, 2009

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justbeformlessly

“It is the best dream of all I see”--- Very nice—makes you wonder if we’re all always dreaming? .’/

Can he ever really leave--- where does all of him that is now part of you end and he begin?

Sometimes it seems like we live in a daily world of “permanence”. We try to hold onto things, but it cannot be done; for if one manages to “hold on”, what he has clung to is no longer what it was. =]

Beautiful!:

“Youre the soil around me that,
Keeps me from falling and,
The water that keeps me alive,


This was fun too- I like your work… please let me know when you post more- Happy writing : )

Wed, July 15th, 2009 7:33pm

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