the phantom of the pool

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

just a little ghost story i tellr ound twyligth to my friends

there she was outside of the abandoned public pool.
she had lost the bet and had to stay there for a night.
the stories cant be true she thought.
she went inside.
found pretty decent place to sleep the old showers.
she looked trough the old pool.
the water was still in the different sets of pools
she soon fell asleep
later that night she heard something she could only describe as a blub in the competition pool.
"ah thats the water clearing they forgot to turn it off."
she said to herself
an hour later there it was again.
"stupid water clearing system."
she said to herself
3 minutes later again the same sound.
she got out of her so called bed and went to the pool.
there were no ligths so the watter was a dark mass.
giving it an eary look.
nothing happened.
she turned her back to the pool.
she heared again.
she turned around and saw ripples in the water.
it scared her.
"who is there?"
she asket.
soon after that the water startet rising in the form of an old top hat.
"rigth im sorry oke i will go ou are real i get it now."
she said freaket out.
soon the risen water looket like the shape of a full grown man
the figure walket over the water.
and as soon as it hit the stone walk ways it turned visable as a full grown pale man.
he came to her slowly
she backt up.
when he reacht her he strecht his arm and said...
"can i borrow a towl im a bit wet."


Submitted: March 17, 2012

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Twist ending. I like it ;)

Sat, March 17th, 2012 9:28pm

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