Mr Kay

Poem by: Emma D

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This is my first poem, so please could I have some feedback, so that I know whether it is good or bad. Thank you! :)

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Submitted: April 04, 2009

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Submitted: April 04, 2009

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Mr Kay, that's his name

People whisper, as in shame

Of his wrongs, though he is right

To burn with anger, with all his might

People shiver, people stare

Not daring to look upon his evil glare,

Teachers tut, students flee,

Hoping 'that will never be me!'


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Mr Kay

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Genre: Poetry

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This is my first poem, so please could I have some feedback, so that I know whether it is good or bad. Thank you! :)
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