How You Make Me Feel

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

The title basically explains itself...this is my first poem so please don't be too harsh...i realize that it doesn't rhyme and it probably isn't that good but i just felt like i needed to express myself so i wrote it...lol

How You Make Me Feel

I thought you were special,

Maybe even the “one”

You were so sweet and kind,

I felt like I was the only girl alive.

We would talk everyday

We could talk about anything and everything

Nothing else seemed to matter

Soon you became more distant.

I tried my best to stay in touch

But nothing worked.

You just left me behind.

Now you have moved on to another girl

Will you make her feel the same?

Will you tell her she is beautiful,

Different from other girls?

Or will you ignore her,

Leave her,

Mistreat her?

Who knows if you will be the same?

Who knows if I was just a joke?

All I know is that you make me feel like shit,

And I am tired of feeling sick.


Submitted: April 17, 2009

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FieldHockey54

i love this!!!!! great work!!keep writing!

Fri, April 17th, 2009 3:26am

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Wow thanks!! i ddnt rlly think anyone would lik this lol...but thank u!!

Sat, April 18th, 2009 7:06pm

FieldHockey54

are u kidding?its great:)

Mon, April 20th, 2009 4:09am

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Really? Thank you so much!! i didn't noe bc i rlly don't noe tht much about poetry...but i'm glad u like it!!

Tue, April 21st, 2009 6:24pm

XxXBrokenXxX

Awww, I liked it!! Sure, it did't rhyme like most poems, but that's what makes it different. Great job!!

Fri, May 8th, 2009 12:29am

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Thank you so much!!

Thu, May 7th, 2009 7:39pm

hhhh

This was seriously good! Man if I had some courage like that, I'd be on top of the world, instead I shake in the corner. I'm so stupid!

Tue, July 7th, 2009 9:26pm

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Thank you so much! You are not stupid! I find if you fake courage than you get so used to it that you really are confident!

Wed, July 8th, 2009 8:23pm

Brian W

You expressed yourself well in this and I think it is a good poem. You have put your feelings into it and the reader can feel your hurt when reading this. Well written

Thu, July 9th, 2009 3:49am

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Really? Thanks again:]

Wed, July 8th, 2009 8:57pm

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