I'm Done With You

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Humor  |  House: Booksie Classic

Just this cute little poem I came up with after watching a movie:]

I'm Done With You

Your actions say what your mouth can not.

You think you're good, that you won't be caught.

But as your eyes flicker towards the ground,

the shuffling of your shoes is the only sound.

Until my laughter rang through the air,

your eyes glanced up, confused and scared.

"What's so funny?" you ask innocently.

"That you actually believed you could trick me."

"What?" you asked, probably wondering how your plan fell through.

"In moron speak that means your pathetic, and I'm done with you."

Submitted: July 21, 2009

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lol, moron speak. haha ) this was so good! i suck at writing poems :S oh well lol

Tue, July 21st, 2009 4:42am


Haha i know lol..thank you so muc:]...I don't consider myself a poet either i just write what i feel like writing lol...

Tue, July 21st, 2009 8:07pm

vampire babe

lolz thats funny an di feel bad for the guy only a little but then he may have had it coming so what movie did you watch that made you write this poem

Wed, August 5th, 2009 1:37am


Haha lol thanks...hmmm..actually..I don't remember lol..I think it was some stupid Sci-Fi movie that my dad made me watch..I don't have anything against Sci-Fi but their visual effects suck!! lol

Tue, August 4th, 2009 7:44pm


lol i like this one very In your face kinda deal lol wow i said almost the same thing to my ex lol wow but yea neway great


Sun, August 23rd, 2009 6:21am


Haha i know it is pretty in your facish..Wow thats amazing I wonder how he reacted that lol..thanks:]

Sat, August 22nd, 2009 11:22pm


loved it its a poem that im sure many can relate to i no i can lol

Wed, December 16th, 2009 4:24am

Vinod Kumar

good one!! beleive me I can never right poems. This requires a lot more than jut writting some stories.
I am a new witter. Please read my latest short story http://www.booksie.com/mystery_and_crime/short_story/vinod_kumar/tony/chapter/1
I am eagerly waiting for views from experts on this website

Thu, September 6th, 2012 7:41am

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