Two angels sitting inside the sun

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Poem by: emmet braun

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Status: Finished | Genre: Poetry | House: Booksie Classic

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Two angels sitting on the sun kissing and hugging and having so much fun.

Submitted: July 23, 2015

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Love and the sun drops, the mountain rocks, the ocean shocks, waves of desire, release of the heart cry,for the ocean can never lie to the island as the mountain takes a bite out of the sea, Hearts once broken are now healed, the grasshopper singing in the field, Fire rain and ice as the true form inter-seeds as the sea feeds again on the ground, singing from the clouds that glorious sound, two angels kisses as the mystery turns to dust, smile and touch her cheek, do as you must, the lovers together brought the earth together in trust, living as one once we were again, they always knew two hearts can live and beat as one.

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UcumpleteMExx

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Thu, July 23rd, 2015 8:11pm

Nice poem. Shalom! I feal a connection to your words.

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Fri, July 24th, 2015 11:09am

You are and thanks buy my ebook im donating part to starving people.

Rhynne Asad

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Thu, July 23rd, 2015 8:20pm

I liked this quite a bit, but please do create lines with your poetry. If that's something you choose not to do out of artistic license, I understand, but the lack of line breaks and the font you chose make it very hard on the eyes as a reader. I enjoyed it but I would have liked it more if I were able to read it more easily.

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Fri, July 24th, 2015 11:11am

Okay ill start doing that