all those scars on your arms
that cold blade your hands
when i look at you all you can say is
" dont worry, all these scars on my arms are just a reminder
of how many times you broke my heart!!! "
Submitted: January 08, 2008
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short and powerfull thoughts.....to happier days juliet
Tue, January 8th, 2008 3:44pmStrong yet powerful. I know what its like to be heartbroken.
---Kcy:]
Very powerful, very emotional. It conveys your feelings well, even through simplicity, I loved it.
Wed, January 9th, 2008 12:02amI know where your coming from. TRUE
Wed, January 9th, 2008 1:54amDam than i wonder how many times has he broken her heart, but then it is her fault not wanting to move on to find a better guy who wouldn't break her heart and likes her back. Sorry if it wasn't a comment you expected...
Wed, January 9th, 2008 5:20amawh. very powerful. and sad. i think we've all been in similar situations as writers [or maybe its just me xD] but how we deal is in what makes us differnet. i love the piece sweetie (:
Wed, January 9th, 2008 6:32amI was going to say it was powerful...but everyone's already said that. :(
Well it is though! VERY powerful. Very moving, very strong.
:D :D :D :D
Ouch! Poor guy/girl! ~ KB
Wed, February 6th, 2008 9:51amThis is very powerful and I can so relate to that *Sigh*. I can't wait to read more of your work :)
Fri, February 8th, 2008 8:56pmReally good poem its very personal and deep
Mon, February 25th, 2008 10:21pmnice...liked it...
Sat, March 8th, 2008 8:54amstong? powerful? i like it... a lot... i actually know how you feel..
Mon, March 10th, 2008 3:25pmI like it. It speaks of true pain. Raw emotion.
Tue, March 11th, 2008 1:45pmthis is very good, very powerful!
Mon, March 24th, 2008 11:09pmI like how it was written in that point of view. Maybe you would like my featured poem
Wed, March 26th, 2008 7:22amWords spoken of truth.
This is completely correct.
Nice job.
short but very good. i liked it
Sun, April 6th, 2008 2:04amawww, so sad. Simple and gets to the point, just how I like em'! Keep up the good work lovely.
Steph:)
The simple, unrefined words and sentences work extremely well to illustrate a soul in pain. Well done!
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That's perfect and I really think I know how you feel. If you ever need anyone to talk to, I'm always around. Just leave me a message and I'll get back to ya within the day.
Tue, January 8th, 2008 9:20amCan't wait to see more from you!
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thnx... :D
Tue, January 8th, 2008 1:42amokie dokiezz i will..
and thnx again ^___^