broken heart..
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Poem by: emosakuraisbrokenhearted1
all those scars on your arms
that cold blade your hands
when i look at you all you can say is
" dont worry, all these scars on my arms are just a reminder
of how many times you broke my heart!!! "
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Strong ending... Pretty truthful though. Vengeance is easy, especially when you use someone elses' caring nature against them.... i know... you could say i was told that last line.
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thnx..
:D
That's perfect and I really think I know how you feel. If you ever need anyone to talk to, I'm always around. Just leave me a message and I'll get back to ya within the day.
Can't wait to see more from you!
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thnx... :D
okie dokiezz i will..
and thnx again ^___^
short and powerfull thoughts.....to happier days juliet
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thnx..
:D
Strong yet powerful. I know what its like to be heartbroken.
---Kcy:]
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thnx...
:]
oo rlly...
D:
Very powerful, very emotional. It conveys your feelings well, even through simplicity, I loved it.
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thnx..
:D
I know where your coming from. TRUE
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rlly well thnx..
^___^
Dam than i wonder how many times has he broken her heart, but then it is her fault not wanting to move on to find a better guy who wouldn't break her heart and likes her back. Sorry if it wasn't a comment you expected...
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haha lolerzzz its okie dokiezz mokie..
:D
awh. very powerful. and sad. i think we've all been in similar situations as writers [or maybe its just me xD] but how we deal is in what makes us differnet. i love the piece sweetie (:
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thnk u vry much
^___^
I was going to say it was powerful...but everyone's already said that. :(
Well it is though! VERY powerful. Very moving, very strong.
:D :D :D :D
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lolerzz yea...
thnx..
~___^
Ouch! Poor guy/girl! ~ KB
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yea... lol
This is very powerful and I can so relate to that *Sigh*. I can't wait to read more of your work :)
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thnk u...
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strong and to the point. I will say it again, though many have said it above, made for a powerful piece of reading.
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thnk u vry much!;,
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Really good poem its very personal and deep
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thnk u;,
~____^
nice...liked it...
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thnx.
>:B
stong? powerful? i like it... a lot... i actually know how you feel..
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thnxx!.
:D
lol yea...
0//0
lol-erzz
I like it. It speaks of true pain. Raw emotion.
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thnk u for the cmt!;,
&& thxx.
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this is very good, very powerful!
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thnxxx!!
:DD hahahehehoho lol
I like how it was written in that point of view. Maybe you would like my featured poem
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thnk u!
&& maybee i will check it outt
:D
Words spoken of truth.
This is completely correct.
Nice job.
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thnxx againn!
:) lol
short but very good. i liked it
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yeshh it ishh..
&& thnxx!
:D
lolll
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