broken heart..

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

i rlly dont noe wat ratin 2 give this so i juss rated it g-rated for all ages... :D

all those scars on your arms

that cold blade your hands

when i look at you all you can say is

" dont worry, all these scars on my arms are just a reminder

of how many times you broke my heart!!! "


Submitted: January 08, 2008

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dragonrider

That's perfect and I really think I know how you feel. If you ever need anyone to talk to, I'm always around. Just leave me a message and I'll get back to ya within the day.

Can't wait to see more from you!

Tue, January 8th, 2008 9:20am

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thnx... :D
okie dokiezz i will..
and thnx again ^___^

Tue, January 8th, 2008 1:42am

mum55

short and powerfull thoughts.....to happier days juliet

Tue, January 8th, 2008 3:44pm

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thnx..
:D

Tue, January 8th, 2008 11:28am

KacyisdaSHIT

Strong yet powerful. I know what its like to be heartbroken.

---Kcy:]

Tue, January 8th, 2008 10:20pm

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thnx...
:]
oo rlly...
D:

Tue, January 8th, 2008 2:37pm

Itsuwari

Very powerful, very emotional. It conveys your feelings well, even through simplicity, I loved it.

Wed, January 9th, 2008 12:02am

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thnx..
:D

Tue, January 8th, 2008 4:03pm

poewhit

I know where your coming from. TRUE

Wed, January 9th, 2008 1:54am

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rlly well thnx..
^___^

Tue, January 8th, 2008 6:29pm

ezzy

Dam than i wonder how many times has he broken her heart, but then it is her fault not wanting to move on to find a better guy who wouldn't break her heart and likes her back. Sorry if it wasn't a comment you expected...

Wed, January 9th, 2008 5:20am

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haha lolerzzz its okie dokiezz mokie..
:D

Tue, January 8th, 2008 9:20pm

cris x

awh. very powerful. and sad. i think we've all been in similar situations as writers [or maybe its just me xD] but how we deal is in what makes us differnet. i love the piece sweetie (:

Wed, January 9th, 2008 6:32am

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thnk u vry much
^___^

Tue, January 8th, 2008 10:55pm

The Megathon

I was going to say it was powerful...but everyone's already said that. :(

Well it is though! VERY powerful. Very moving, very strong.

:D :D :D :D

Tue, January 15th, 2008 6:54am

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lolerzz yea...
thnx..
~___^

Tue, January 15th, 2008 10:32am

Kinkyboots

Ouch! Poor guy/girl! ~ KB

Wed, February 6th, 2008 9:51am

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yea... lol

Wed, February 6th, 2008 10:39am

SeleneStone

This is very powerful and I can so relate to that *Sigh*. I can't wait to read more of your work :)

Fri, February 8th, 2008 8:56pm

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thnk u...
x"]

Fri, February 8th, 2008 2:58pm

dreamingofalbion

Really good poem its very personal and deep

Mon, February 25th, 2008 10:21pm

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thnk u;,
~____^

Mon, February 25th, 2008 2:27pm

helmark

nice...liked it...

Sat, March 8th, 2008 8:54am

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thnx.
>:B

Sat, March 8th, 2008 6:44am

no1

stong? powerful? i like it... a lot... i actually know how you feel..

Mon, March 10th, 2008 3:25pm

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thnxx!.
:D
lol yea...
0//0
lol-erzz

Mon, March 10th, 2008 5:33pm

Jesyka

I like it. It speaks of true pain. Raw emotion.

Tue, March 11th, 2008 1:45pm

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thnk u for the cmt!;,
&& thxx.
:']

Tue, March 11th, 2008 1:51pm

seesawmae

this is very good, very powerful!

Mon, March 24th, 2008 11:09pm

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thnxxx!!
:DD hahahehehoho lol

Mon, March 24th, 2008 4:14pm

mike folley

I like how it was written in that point of view. Maybe you would like my featured poem

Wed, March 26th, 2008 7:22am

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thnk u!
&& maybee i will check it outt
:D

Wed, March 26th, 2008 4:18pm

TatyanaPsychoticTaciturn

Words spoken of truth.
This is completely correct.
Nice job.

Fri, March 28th, 2008 10:16pm

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thnxx againn!
:) lol

Fri, March 28th, 2008 6:54pm

Priest

short but very good. i liked it

Sun, April 6th, 2008 2:04am

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yeshh it ishh..
&& thnxx!
:D
lolll

Sun, April 6th, 2008 1:51pm

stephhlebreton

awww, so sad. Simple and gets to the point, just how I like em'! Keep up the good work lovely.
Steph:)

Mon, April 7th, 2008 5:21pm

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thnkk u vryy muchh!!
&& ill tryy 2 keep upp the workk
>:B

Mon, April 7th, 2008 12:13pm

Tamil

The simple, unrefined words and sentences work extremely well to illustrate a soul in pain. Well done!

Thu, April 24th, 2008 10:42am

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loll thank juu very muchh!.
x]

Fri, April 25th, 2008 8:58pm

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