all those scars on your arms
that cold blade your hands
when i look at you all you can say is
" dont worry, all these scars on my arms are just a reminder
of how many times you broke my heart!!! "
Submitted: January 08, 2008
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short and powerfull thoughts.....to happier days juliet
Tue, January 8th, 2008 3:44pm
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thnx..
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Strong yet powerful. I know what its like to be heartbroken.
---Kcy:]
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thnx...
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oo rlly...
D:
Very powerful, very emotional. It conveys your feelings well, even through simplicity, I loved it.
Wed, January 9th, 2008 12:02am
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thnx..
:D
I know where your coming from. TRUE
Wed, January 9th, 2008 1:54am
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rlly well thnx..
^___^
Dam than i wonder how many times has he broken her heart, but then it is her fault not wanting to move on to find a better guy who wouldn't break her heart and likes her back. Sorry if it wasn't a comment you expected...
Wed, January 9th, 2008 5:20am
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haha lolerzzz its okie dokiezz mokie..
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awh. very powerful. and sad. i think we've all been in similar situations as writers [or maybe its just me xD] but how we deal is in what makes us differnet. i love the piece sweetie (:
Wed, January 9th, 2008 6:32am
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thnk u vry much
^___^
I was going to say it was powerful...but everyone's already said that. :(
Well it is though! VERY powerful. Very moving, very strong.
:D :D :D :D
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lolerzz yea...
thnx..
~___^
Ouch! Poor guy/girl! ~ KB
Wed, February 6th, 2008 9:51am
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yea... lol
Wed, February 6th, 2008 10:39am
This is very powerful and I can so relate to that *Sigh*. I can't wait to read more of your work :)
Fri, February 8th, 2008 8:56pm
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thnk u...
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Really good poem its very personal and deep
Mon, February 25th, 2008 10:21pm
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thnk u;,
~____^
nice...liked it...
Sat, March 8th, 2008 8:54am
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thnx.
>:B
stong? powerful? i like it... a lot... i actually know how you feel..
Mon, March 10th, 2008 3:25pm
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thnxx!.
:D
lol yea...
0//0
lol-erzz
I like it. It speaks of true pain. Raw emotion.
Tue, March 11th, 2008 1:45pm
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thnk u for the cmt!;,
&& thxx.
:']
this is very good, very powerful!
Mon, March 24th, 2008 11:09pm
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thnxxx!!
:DD hahahehehoho lol
I like how it was written in that point of view. Maybe you would like my featured poem
Wed, March 26th, 2008 7:22am
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thnk u!
&& maybee i will check it outt
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Words spoken of truth.
This is completely correct.
Nice job.
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thnxx againn!
:) lol
short but very good. i liked it
Sun, April 6th, 2008 2:04am
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yeshh it ishh..
&& thnxx!
:D
lolll
awww, so sad. Simple and gets to the point, just how I like em'! Keep up the good work lovely.
Steph:)
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thnkk u vryy muchh!!
&& ill tryy 2 keep upp the workk
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The simple, unrefined words and sentences work extremely well to illustrate a soul in pain. Well done!
Thu, April 24th, 2008 10:42am
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loll thank juu very muchh!.
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That's perfect and I really think I know how you feel. If you ever need anyone to talk to, I'm always around. Just leave me a message and I'll get back to ya within the day.
Tue, January 8th, 2008 9:20amCan't wait to see more from you!
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thnx... :D
Tue, January 8th, 2008 1:42amokie dokiezz i will..
and thnx again ^___^