:)

I can still recall the taste of your tears.

And the echoing of your voice in my ears.

Your always the one to show me how

to do the things that I can do now.

He is teaching me

What love means.

In this place it seems like a shame.

And though it all looks different now,

I know its all the same.

The stars are enchanting another.

And I can hear you breathing softly.

Your words echo in my mind.

And now I know you are here.

He is teaching me

What love means.

In this place it seems like a shame.

And though it all looks different now,

I know its all the same.

Your the reason that i dream tomorrow.

Your the reason that i live today.


Submitted: May 24, 2008

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Sameera1127

Like diz poem and dat u said dat god iz teaching you...Give diz poem a 8.5 out of 10.

Wed, May 28th, 2008 9:55pm

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LOLL;
thankk youu.(:

Thu, May 29th, 2008 1:24pm

kaylalebreton

awww i love this i have a new pome up if u want to read it :)
i really really like it. it's cute
tillz

-peace out-

Wed, May 28th, 2008 10:40pm

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LOLL thank youu;
andd i will checkk it outt.!;]
LOLL(:

Thu, May 29th, 2008 1:25pm

Brani Bernanke

That was cute.

Fri, May 30th, 2008 2:56pm

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LOLL;
thank youu.(:

Fri, May 30th, 2008 2:48pm

kitty08

This wuz good!

Thu, June 5th, 2008 4:43pm

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LOLL;
hahaa thankk youuhh lovee(:

Thu, June 5th, 2008 7:09pm

ForgottenKisses

I don't know what it is, but I really love this line:

The stars are enchanting another.

It's just... great.

Mon, June 9th, 2008 5:32am

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ahahaa thankss :D

Mon, June 9th, 2008 9:58am

SnowBunny

That was great!

Wed, June 11th, 2008 10:09pm

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ahahaa thanks lovee(:

Sat, June 14th, 2008 2:37pm

Chumb

that was beautiful,

real touching




x

Sat, June 21st, 2008 12:13am

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thankk youuhh very muchh deariee(:

Fri, June 20th, 2008 6:50pm

hmgirl

that was amazing!
i really liked it!

Mon, June 23rd, 2008 6:18pm

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ahahaa thankk youh
dearieeXD

Mon, June 23rd, 2008 5:24pm

viper

Very Nice And Beautiful. I Really Enjoyed It.

Sat, July 12th, 2008 4:59pm

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Thank youh veryy much Deariee(:

Mon, July 14th, 2008 6:03pm

Carnation

I love it... i am going through the same feelings and with he understands. I think i can't express my emotions as lucidly as you can... share your blessings with me.

LOVE.

Sun, July 13th, 2008 6:56am

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Thank youh Deariee;
Andd reallyy? Well I'll be glad to share my Blessings with
youh Lovee(:

Andd Thank youh againn

Mon, July 14th, 2008 6:04pm

Carnation

I mean i wish he understands...

Depressed soul

Sun, July 13th, 2008 6:58am

John LLoyd

i really like this good job

Wed, July 16th, 2008 7:59am

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Thank youh veryy Muchh Deariee(:

Thu, July 17th, 2008 3:03pm

EdwardJBradleySr

emosakuraisbrokenhearted1:

Exceedingly well written! Most inspirational! Gave it an "I Like It" vote.

Envisioned this written by a young mother. About, for and to her own infant child.

Thank you for becoming a fan.

Will read your other postings. At times, will cast an "I Like It" vote without commenting.

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Wed, July 30th, 2008 11:50pm

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Loll ahaha thankk youh Lovee(:

Thu, July 31st, 2008 2:55pm

Zia Jaycee

awww wow.....i loved it pls keep writing! :)

Sat, August 2nd, 2008 10:21pm

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Awwhh;;
Thank youh soo muchh LoveCx

Mon, August 4th, 2008 4:43pm

XLoX

aha..I giv it a 9/10..lol
it was really good and I luv the rhyming =P
*claps
goood work =]

Fri, August 15th, 2008 7:52am

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Loll ahahaa ThankYouhh Deariee!Cx

Fri, August 15th, 2008 7:28pm

DiscoveredDream

>-- I adore this poem. Made me think of the hubby.!

Mon, August 18th, 2008 1:29am

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Ahaa thankyouhh!XD

Tue, August 19th, 2008 2:08pm

oppoiccaC

Good job I enjoyed it, and I think I got th emeaning..


Thu, October 2nd, 2008 2:28pm

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Thank youh;
&Really? That's good!!~*

Wed, October 15th, 2008 4:42pm

Haylieee Hamiltonnn

wicked great poem. i loved it:) great job:)

-Haylieee

Sun, February 15th, 2009 5:27pm

ShadowlegionXIII

I really liked this! =D

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