i dont deserve this

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

this poem is about god and how no one but him can create somthing wonderful...
:D

i dont deserve this.

it wasnt me.

i cant take glory for something that i cant create.

and ill show you what he did.

but i wont take the credit.

and all this art i create.

is just a faded relection.

of what he has already made.

its not mine anyway.

i was just holding a pen that day.

and thank you for being such a friend to me.

you mean so much to me.

i am gazing at eternity.

and i am falling in serenity.

 

 


Submitted: January 09, 2008

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cris x

love it

Wed, January 9th, 2008 11:02pm

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thnx
^___^
im happy u do..
:D
LOLERZZ. :]

Wed, January 9th, 2008 3:12pm

DarkFairy8907

Yep, we can't take the credit. He was the one who planted the words into our hearts, and we wrote them down. Well done.

~DarkFairy~

Sat, January 12th, 2008 5:42am

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thnk u vry much!!
^w^

Fri, January 11th, 2008 9:46pm

Itsuwari

Brilliantly written, very well done, i loved the structure and feel and flow of it. Bloody hell of a write. No pun intended.

Sat, January 12th, 2008 11:01pm

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~thnk u very much~
^w^

Sat, January 12th, 2008 3:20pm

Kinkyboots

An inspiring read! ~ KB

Wed, February 6th, 2008 9:47am

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thnk u very much..
x"]

Wed, February 6th, 2008 10:39am

rickyengland

Hey, I really like this. I believe too that God made us 'in His image', so we inherited the need to be creative. Ricky.

Sat, February 9th, 2008 12:16am

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thnk u...
&& yea i think dat 2...

Fri, February 8th, 2008 4:28pm

KourtChaos

I love it.
Beautiful.

Sun, February 24th, 2008 7:03am

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thnk u vry much!;,
:'D

Sun, February 24th, 2008 5:01pm

dreamingofalbion

I love this poem i think its a great outlool and is very well written

Mon, February 25th, 2008 4:31pm

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thnk u vry much!;,
^w6

Mon, February 25th, 2008 12:25pm

dreamingofalbion

I really like this poem its really deep and really made me think
stephen

Mon, February 25th, 2008 9:14pm

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thnk u!;,
:']

Mon, February 25th, 2008 2:16pm

MissGC

it is awssome im going to read more as soon as i get homme... thankies for the welcome message too!
Peace

Fri, February 29th, 2008 3:42am

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thnk u vry much!;,
&& kk;,

oo&& ur welcomez;,
:']

Thu, February 28th, 2008 7:53pm

TomWilliams

Wow. You're right. But surely God only created the old world? The human race took what was given to them and built themelves an empire of steel and stone and electricity. We have disobeyed Nature- we have broken her finest law: Surivival of the Fittest. And so perhaps God is merely the source of everything, and he is merely witnessing our own destruction? Hm. That's my theory, anyway.

Thu, March 6th, 2008 10:44pm

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well u might be rite.,
but u never noe.,
butt 1 day god will come bck and take his ppl who follow him and then the 1's who dont will stay on earth with all thats going to happen which is the destruction of this earth and all of the ppl on earth who dont follow him.,
its pretty sad that ppl dont see god did create the world and it brakes his heart 2 see all of these things happenin dat he doesnt want 2 happen.,
&& he is juzz watchin pur own destruction and its sad dat he has 2.,
butt thats wat i believe and its true sooo yea;,

Thu, March 6th, 2008 3:01pm

craaig

I love your outpouring of genuine humility. I feel the same, but often find it difficult to express.
Well done. Please check the typo in lime 7.
craaig

Fri, March 7th, 2008 8:55am

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thnk u;,
8w8

Fri, March 7th, 2008 8:26am

hannahlisous

WOW, I think the same
thing!!! He's amazing isn't
he!? (God is) We can't take
the credit for doing something
that we didn't do. If it's bad
or good. In this case it's good.

Sun, March 9th, 2008 4:30am

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yea god is amazing!;,
i noe i dont noe y ppl do take credit for wat god did.
its not rite that they do.,

butt thnx for the cmt!
:D

Sat, March 8th, 2008 8:44pm

Chumb

GOD zz AMAziNGg...

[ & ] bookwormtom
how can yyou seyy that,???

durr, god was the one that has given you life
the one who gave you talent
the one who gave us all talent
but most of all he has carved our nameson hispalm just to show how much he love's us
he's the man that you'll wish you had in your life..

don't judge the lord:
It is written in the Bible (Galatians 6:7):
'Be not deceived; God is not mocked:
for whatsoever a man soweth, that shall he also reap.

Here are some men and women who mocked God :

John Lennon (Singer):

Some years before, during his interview with an American Magazine, he said:
'Christianity
will end, it will disappear.
I do not have to argue about that. I am certain.
Jesus was OK, but his subjects were too simple, Today we are more famous than Him' (1966).

Lennon,
after saying that the Beatles were more famous than
Jesus Christ, was shot six times.

Tancredo Neves (President of Brazil ):
During the Presidential campaign, he said if he got 500,000 votes from his party, not even God would remove him from Presidency.

Sure he got the votes, but he got sick a day before being made President, then he died

The man who built the Titanic:

After the construction of Titanic, a reporter asked him how safe the Titanic would be.
With an ironic tone he said:
'Not even God can sink it'

The result:I think you all know
what happened to the Titanic

Marilyn Monroe (Actress):

She was visited by Billy Graham during a presentation of a show. &nbs p;He said the Spirit of God had sent him to preach to her.
After hearing what the Preacher had to say, she said:
'I don't need your Jesus'

A week later, she was found dead in her apartment

Bon Scott (Singer)
The ex-vo calist of the AC/DC. On one of his 1979 songs he sang:
'Don't stop me, I'm going down all the way, down the highway to hell'.

On the 19th of February 1980, Bon Scott was found dead, he had been choked by his own vomit..

Campinas (IN 2005):

In Campinas , Brazil a group of friends, drunk, went to pick up a friend.....
The mother accompanied her to the car and was so worried about the drunkenness of her friends and she said to the daughter holding her hand, who was
already seated in the car:
'My Daughter, Go With God And May He Protect You..'
She responded: 'Only If He (God) Travels In The Trunk, Cause Inside Here.....It's Already Full '

Hours later, news came by that they had been involved in a fatal accident, everyone had died , the car could not be recognized what
type of car it had been, but surprisingly, the trunk was intact.The police said there was no way the trunk could have remained intact. To their surprise, inside the trunk was a crate of eggs, none was broken .

Christine Hewitt:
(Jamaican Journalist and entertainer) said the Bible (Word of God) was the worst book ever written.

In June 2006 she was found burnt beyond recognition in her motor vehicle.

Many more important people have forgotten that there is no other name that was given so much authority as the name of Jesus.

Many have died, but only Jesus died and rose style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: blue"> again, and he is still alive .

'Jesus'

P.S: If it was a joke, you would have sent it to everyone. So are you going to have courage to send this?.

I have done my part, Jesus said

'If you are embarrassed about me, I will also be embarrassed about you before my father..'

You are my 8 in 8 seconds. I am not breaking this. No way!

I'M TOLD THIS WORKS!!!!! Bishop T.D. Jakes '8 Second Prayer.' Just repeat this prayer and see how God moves!!

'Lord, I love you and I need you, come into my heart, and bless me, my family, my home, and my friends, in Jesus' name. Amen.'


GOD zz GOOD LOVE HIM LyyK FOREVER
PLEASE i AM NOT TRyyNA H SAY THIS tOO SEyy BAd tHiNgzz bUht pLz bELiEVE HE zz EVERyytHing

i pray for you bookwormtom
because one day i hope you may follow GOD

PEACE =]]
LOVE yy0O'zz ALL
GOD LOVE'zz YOU ALL t0O Bit'zz

GOD zz FOREVER OUR RULER AND GOD UNtiL THE END OF TYM

MWAH'zz

LOVE yyAA'ZZ



Wed, March 26th, 2008 9:33am

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god ishh amazingg
&& if no1 cann see thatt then hopeefullyy
theyy will see! bc evry thinn u saidd
wuz truee and i bless u for sayingg it
on heree! :D
thnxx againn!!
ilyy

Wed, March 26th, 2008 4:27pm

Chumb

hehe (+.+)

so tru, GOD zz d awesomest,

he mayyke'zz everyone to be different,
mayyke'zz USz aLl indiViduaL [ & ] SPECIAL

[GOD zz SPECIAL AND AMAyyzzing] =]]

Fri, March 28th, 2008 12:18pm

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yeshh it ishh!! :D
god ish amazingg AND speciall!!
:]
butt thnxx for
the cmtt!! x3

Fri, March 28th, 2008 12:09pm

TatyanaPsychoticTaciturn

Wow, that was a really pretty piece.

Fri, March 28th, 2008 10:15pm

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thnk u vryy muchh!!
n__n

Fri, March 28th, 2008 6:53pm

kellybelle

i really like it

Wed, April 2nd, 2008 5:02pm

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thnk u vryy muchh,
:]

Wed, April 2nd, 2008 3:27pm

seesawmae

wow, this is really good, i like it a lot!

Sat, April 5th, 2008 2:32am

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thnk u vryy muchh!! :]

Fri, April 4th, 2008 8:07pm

stephhlebreton

Wonderfully put. Your faith really shows, I'm glad there are people not affraid to express it, Bravo! it was nothing less than lovely. Looking forward to reading more lovely.
Steph:)

Sun, April 6th, 2008 5:56am

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thnkk u vryy muchh!!
&& yeshh im gladd theree ishh 2..
&& im gladd thatt i gott overr aboutt
wat ppl thinkk aboutt mehh and my regligon (sp?)
butt thnxx againn :D

Sun, April 6th, 2008 1:53pm

Fletcher

Nice. A good reminder to one now and again... It´s not us. It´s Him.

Thu, April 10th, 2008 9:58pm

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thnx!.
&& yeshh thats rightt.
it isntt us..
its himm
;]

Thu, April 10th, 2008 7:46pm

rainyman

I liked your poem very much. Apparently there are many people in your age group who have faith in God. This is very good news for people in my age group who sometimes wonder. God is while we remain what was. Thanks for the great read and thanks for your welcome to Booksie. Stop by my page when you have the time. rainy

Mon, April 14th, 2008 1:05am

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thank you veryy muchh!!
yeaa there ishh! :]
yeshh God ishh! x]
&& your welcomezz!
&& okie dokiezz i will tryy too!!
:D

Sun, April 13th, 2008 10:16pm

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