pouring out of passion.
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Poem by: emosakuraisbrokenhearted1
I was pouring out of passion.
To light the step your on.
You choose not to hear or waken.
All thats left is you alone.
His voice cut through the war in my head.
Screaming something i could understand.
And somehow he knew me when he said:
"Is there anyone who's desperate,
for anything more than this?"
I know what perfection is like.
And i can not stand before its might.
And im so far from what you think that i must be.
I just throw myself at mercy.
I was pouring out of passion.
To light the step your on.
You choose not to hear or waken.
All thats left is you alone.
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wow, very passionate, haha. I guess that defines the name of it eh. Really good, you're quite talented.
Steph:)
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lol thnxx!
yeaa i guess it doess ;D
lol && thnxx againn..
loll\
this is a nice poem i know what it is like to be that way lol
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lol thnxx!
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Wow very nice!!
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thank juu veryy muchh!
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Powerful in the emotional narrative. Deep and lively, this is a good poem.
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thankk juu veryy muchh!
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This makes a good song..
This is deep, i give it three thumbs..
You know what..I'm going to say stars for now on..I give this a 3 out of 5 stars.
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loll okayy.!
thankss.!
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nice work! my favorite line: his voice cut through the war in my head
keep it up! :]
dubL
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thankk juu.!
:D LOLL.
I know what perfection is like.
And i can not stand before its might.
And im so far from what you think that i must be.
I just throw myself at mercy.
^ I love that part. Really awesome :D
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LOLL thankk juu.!
:3
i like this alot
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thankk juu veryy muchh.!
well worded and passionate. good work.
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thankk juuu;
:D
pouring out of passion, i love it.... the name so much depth... makes me feel of opening up my chest and letting the waterfall pour.... brilliant
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AWWZZ:D
LOLL thankk youuhh veryy
muchh lovee;]
ahahaa(:
i love this line..!!
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I know what perfection is like.
And i can not stand before its might.
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LOLL;
ahahaa yeahh(:
great,
keep it up
x
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ahahaa thank youuhh lovee:)
Very nice. This poem is all for the lovvvvvvvvve. xD
Keep writing
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Ahaa Thankyouh againn!
I REALLY LIKED THIS POEM. YOU USED THE WORDS WELL
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