pouring out of passion.
Poem by: emosakuraisbrokenhearted1
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I was pouring out of passion.
To light the step your on.
You choose not to hear or waken.
All thats left is you alone.
His voice cut through the war in my head.
Screaming something i could understand.
And somehow he knew me when he said:
"Is there anyone who's desperate,
for anything more than this?"
I know what perfection is like.
And i can not stand before its might.
And im so far from what you think that i must be.
I just throw myself at mercy.
I was pouring out of passion.
To light the step your on.
You choose not to hear or waken.
All thats left is you alone.
Submitted: April 07, 2008
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this is a nice poem i know what it is like to be that way lol
Tue, April 8th, 2008 8:15pmWow very nice!!
Mon, April 14th, 2008 6:16amPowerful in the emotional narrative. Deep and lively, this is a good poem.
Fri, April 18th, 2008 6:03pmThis makes a good song..
This is deep, i give it three thumbs..
You know what..I'm going to say stars for now on..I give this a 3 out of 5 stars.
nice work! my favorite line: his voice cut through the war in my head
keep it up! :]
dubL
I know what perfection is like.
And i can not stand before its might.
And im so far from what you think that i must be.
I just throw myself at mercy.
^ I love that part. Really awesome :D
i like this alot
Sat, May 17th, 2008 1:25pmwell worded and passionate. good work.
Tue, May 20th, 2008 4:57pmpouring out of passion, i love it.... the name so much depth... makes me feel of opening up my chest and letting the waterfall pour.... brilliant
Fri, June 6th, 2008 11:42pmi love this line..!!
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I know what perfection is like.
And i can not stand before its might.
great,
keep it up
x
Very nice. This poem is all for the lovvvvvvvvve. xD
Keep writing
I REALLY LIKED THIS POEM. YOU USED THE WORDS WELL
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stephhlebreton
wow, very passionate, haha. I guess that defines the name of it eh. Really good, you're quite talented.
Tue, April 8th, 2008 4:26pmSteph:)
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lol thnxx!
Tue, April 8th, 2008 10:27amyeaa i guess it doess ;D
lol && thnxx againn..
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