pouring out of passion.

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

idkk i nevrr noee wat 2 writee in thee summaryy..
TT^TT sryy lol
butt it ishh aboutt Godd
&& i noee thee picturee hazz nottingg 2 do witt it (at leastt i dontt thinkk it doess) i wuzz pickedd 1
xD
butt i mightt makee thiss in to a songg bc i writee songgs..
soo yeaa all i wouldd need 2 do ishh putt 1 moree soloo thingyy in it n__n
lol soo yeaa

I was pouring out of passion.

To light the step your on.

You choose not to hear or waken.

All thats left is you alone.

His voice cut through the war in my head.

Screaming something i could understand.

And somehow he knew me when he said:

"Is there anyone who's desperate,

for anything more than this?"

I know what perfection is like.

And i can not stand before its might.

And im so far from what you think that i must be.

I just throw myself at mercy.

I was pouring out of passion.

To light the step your on.

You choose not to hear or waken.

All thats left is you alone.


Submitted: April 07, 2008

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stephhlebreton

wow, very passionate, haha. I guess that defines the name of it eh. Really good, you're quite talented.
Steph:)

Tue, April 8th, 2008 4:26pm

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lol thnxx!
yeaa i guess it doess ;D
lol && thnxx againn..
loll\

Tue, April 8th, 2008 10:27am

vahndelfire

this is a nice poem i know what it is like to be that way lol

Tue, April 8th, 2008 8:15pm

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lol thnxx!
x]

Tue, April 8th, 2008 1:57pm

honeyrocketship

Wow very nice!!

Mon, April 14th, 2008 6:16am

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thank juu veryy muchh!
x]

Mon, April 14th, 2008 9:31am

wolffe

Powerful in the emotional narrative. Deep and lively, this is a good poem.

Fri, April 18th, 2008 6:03pm

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thankk juu veryy muchh!
>]

Fri, April 18th, 2008 2:54pm

Sameera1127

This makes a good song..
This is deep, i give it three thumbs..
You know what..I'm going to say stars for now on..I give this a 3 out of 5 stars.

Wed, May 7th, 2008 8:34pm

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loll okayy.!
thankss.!
:]

Fri, May 9th, 2008 2:04pm

dubl

nice work! my favorite line: his voice cut through the war in my head
keep it up! :]

dubL

Mon, May 12th, 2008 8:10am

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thankk juu.!
:D LOLL.

Mon, May 12th, 2008 9:28am

JoleneMoon

I know what perfection is like.

And i can not stand before its might.

And im so far from what you think that i must be.

I just throw myself at mercy.


^ I love that part. Really awesome :D

Sat, May 17th, 2008 12:13pm

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LOLL thankk juu.!
:3

Sat, May 17th, 2008 1:38pm

burnedsoul

i like this alot

Sat, May 17th, 2008 1:25pm

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thankk juu veryy muchh.!

Sat, May 17th, 2008 1:38pm

PropheticaLee Speaking

well worded and passionate. good work.

Tue, May 20th, 2008 4:57pm

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thankk juuu;
:D

Tue, May 20th, 2008 5:44pm

floatLinger

pouring out of passion, i love it.... the name so much depth... makes me feel of opening up my chest and letting the waterfall pour.... brilliant

Fri, June 6th, 2008 11:42pm

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AWWZZ:D
LOLL thankk youuhh veryy
muchh lovee;]
ahahaa(:

Fri, June 6th, 2008 6:42pm

an0nym0us

i love this line..!!
::
I know what perfection is like.

And i can not stand before its might.

Sun, June 8th, 2008 2:56am

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LOLL;
ahahaa yeahh(:

Sun, June 8th, 2008 12:12pm

Chumb

great,

keep it up



x

Sat, June 21st, 2008 12:16am

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ahahaa thank youuhh lovee:)

Fri, June 20th, 2008 6:52pm

DiscoveredDream

Very nice. This poem is all for the lovvvvvvvvve. xD

Keep writing

Mon, August 18th, 2008 5:45pm

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Ahaa Thankyouh againn!

Tue, August 19th, 2008 2:09pm

hannah2

I REALLY LIKED THIS POEM. YOU USED THE WORDS WELL

Sat, July 14th, 2012 2:27pm

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