I am pathetic,
You are sad,
We are suicidal,
Until the end,
Of our days.
I am hopeless,
You are unwilling,
We need help,
At least i think we do.
I am crying,
You are screaming,
We are mad,
All through the night.
I am dreaming,
Of my death,
Your are dreaming,
Of ways to kill me,
We both have one thing,
That we want.
We both want me dead,
So shall it be,
I will cut,
You will shoot,
I'll be gone,
Forever more.
Submitted: May 10, 2008
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Comments
that is awesome. it has wonderful flow. such rythm. take care.
Lydia_xxxx
Wow, this was extremely sad. But I really, really liked it. It flowed beautifully, and I could feel the emotion you put into it. Great poem! =D
Sat, May 31st, 2008 1:41am
wow i really like it that was very exciting
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