it is diffrant i will say that

I am pathetic,

You are sad,

We are suicidal,

Until the end,

Of our days.

I am hopeless,

You are unwilling,

We need help,

At least i think we do.

I am crying,

You are screaming,

We are mad,

All through the night.

I am dreaming,

Of my death,

Your are dreaming,

Of ways to kill me,

We both have one thing,

That we want.

We both want me dead,

So shall it be,

I will cut,

You will shoot,

I'll be gone,

Forever more.

Submitted: May 10, 2008

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good sad or bad sad????

Sun, May 11th, 2008 3:20am


that is awesome. it has wonderful flow. such rythm. take care.

Tue, May 27th, 2008 1:55am


Wow, this was extremely sad. But I really, really liked it. It flowed beautifully, and I could feel the emotion you put into it. Great poem! =D

Sat, May 31st, 2008 1:41am


wow i really like it that was very exciting

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