The battle of Aktalahi

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: War and Military  |  House: Booksie Classic

I just made this when i was bored

War is to everyone who has not been there a place of hero's and honour....but war...war is hell.It all began and ended that fateful night, the night that me and my squad die.We where all unawhere of what was in store for us,it was just another day at the camp when sargeant Huarez rallied us all up and brief us of are next mission.....it seemed like it would be a peace of cake or as corporal Choi said "This gonna be like cherrie pie..sweet and delicious",we all had a good chuckle there was myself seargeant Huarez,corporal choi,private hunnigan,private lenix,and private johnson.The mission was that we where to meet anothere team at the rendevous point and then move to the main objective which was search and destroy,we where to locate and destroy a prototype vehicle not fully functional yet....or so we thought.After are last dinner and a rough sleep we boarded the c82 and got prepped up for the mission,after some time we arrived at the drop off point when are plane got hit by enemy fire shrapnel flew everywhere i heard someone yell so i looked to my left and there was corporal choi with a big bullet hole through his chest probably from enemy 88,s.Choi wasnt the only one who was hit the pilot and co-pilot where dead too,the doorman opened it up manually and made sure we all got out and right when he was about to jump some flak from the plane hit his right shoulder and sent him hurling out of the plane...the strat from the parachute was ripped from the shrapnel and i saw him plummet down to the ground...i was scared.I pulled the string of my custom T-10 parachute and it almost suddenly stopped me in mid-air and once i steadeed myself i saw the sarge and the others moving towards a town so i glided toward them....just as i was about to land a member of the squad we where supposed to meet at that very town came running from the buildings yelling...just as we was in front of us his head exploded and my parachute strings where cut i readied my rifle and headed for cover where the others where.Once i arrived the sarge sent me and lenix to try to find a flank he said "Pierce get over here corporal i got's a mission for ye boy take lenix and go find a way to kik this little punk in the ass...you here me boy..o and dont worry im here".Then sarge ordered Hunnigan to fire his bazooka at the town he hesitated at first but changed his mind when his helemt got shot off "oh shit that was close now your gonna get it boy"he readied it and once as he was about to fire the sarge changed his mind.He said "What in sam hell is that" and as he said that we all looked forward "oh my fucken god you gotta be kidding me"said Johnson, hunnigan fired his bazooka but it didnt do a thing.That was it we found the war machine.Lenix tried to run but got blown to peaces i tried to tell hunnigan to reload but when i looked back the top part of his head was gone.Sarge rushed it and got picked up and ripped in half.Johnson started firing his m16 grenade rounds at it and told me to run...that only made it mad.It looked like some sort of demon from storys i couldnt beleave it. The end


Submitted: May 28, 2010

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Enimatius

omg i did not spell a few word's right O.o

Sat, May 29th, 2010 12:11am

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Xena

dude! you look so stoned right now! of course u spelled a few things wrong, you gotta quit writing while your so blitzEd! anyway, what i could understand sounded very true to the military situation.. it kind of just flowed some places a bit better then others.. but the end maybe was a bit abrupt... quit smoking so many doobies dude and edit this and youve got a story!

Sat, May 29th, 2010 12:25am

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lol thank you for being so honest mate I will take the advice that you have given me and work on it =)

Thu, October 7th, 2010 2:36am

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