Poem by: Eraser
rain, raindrop, sounds of rain
Submitted: October 17, 2007
© Copyright 2016 Eraser. All rights reserved.
Eraser, Just loved this one. No, there is nothing more soothing than the rain. It rained for the first time in two years, a couple of weeks ago. I went out and stood in it as if I had never felt it before. What a wonderful feeling. We live in the desert, and although the desert doesn't have an abundance of rain, we have been in a serious 4-year drought.When I was reading this poem, I began to relax. Thank you.I needed that.
thanks so much. i appreciate the kind words.
cool poem, really like it :) like how you did that picture up there, hope I can learn how to do that.
thanks. it's easy to submit a poem. just look for the images icon on the editor. i found it in the posting instructions. tanks again!
i wished it could rain more here. I dont live in a desert like Glenna Marie, i live in one of the most populated areas in Australia, and we are having a drought. Great piece, i love rain so much, an Etude on its own.
thanks lionheart! i'll do a rain dance for you.
Blimey, I like it. It rained in my loungroom this afternoon, but it hasn't rained in the kitchen for over two years, as Australia is currently in drought. I never venture into the bathroom without an umbrella, which is good advice for anyone visiting a public convenience. Your poem's a right balltearer. Cheers Eraser!
uh, thanks, i guess.
Great poem. I really like to listen to the rain, its one of my greatest ways to relax. Its very soothing to the body and spirit. Thanks for the great poem, I hope to read more of your work soon. I wish you well and God Bless. Lisa
Thank you Lisa. I also find the rain very relaxing. I have a rain cd I listen to when I have trouble falling asleep. It helps.
Cute, Sweet, Innocent, and fun. Excellent job of portraying the beauty and splendor of something as simple as the rain.
Thanks so much!
Entertaining and humorous! Nearly audible.
Another nice one. What happened to all of your other postings?
This is actually the first piece I have posted on Booksie. I've commented a lot and finally decided to dip my toe into the water :). Thanks again.
This is cute, just how poems should be :) ~ Nixie
Thanks so much.
small but good!
i leally enjoyed it =]
but then again...
small things come in big pakages
he he, thanks for putting this on, a rare smile in a gloomy day
glad to put a smile on your face :).
I like the atmosphere of the peom...and the way you used sounds to describe the rain!~~~~>O
muchas gracias Loli!
Okay, so I'm loving the onomatopoeia you used to make the rain seem real. It was as if you could actually hear it hitting the roof or splashing on the sidewalk...
Where I live in North Carolina is experiencing super drought conditions right now [although possibly not as bad as what Australia is going through] and this poem is the closest I have gotten to the sound of rain in quite a long time.
Thank you so much for reminding me how relaxing the rain can be. We all need that sometimes. =)
wow - onomatopoeia. love the word and haven't heard it in awhile. i'll do a rain dance for you and hope you get to hear the rain for real. thanks.
Hey, Eraser "san". Do you remember me?
Anyway, nice poem. I enjoyed it a lot.
Hey, I remember, I think. You wrote some alternate ending WWII story, didn't you? Get posting young lad.
Nice!! Makes me think of the BIG drops just before a thunderstorm. I like it. Smooth across one's mind.
Rain is a beautiful thing. I wrote something about it called The Rain Fell, and perhaps you'd like to come and comment? Nice poem, keep up the good work!
thanks very much
When it rains like taht in Caracas i like to be at home in order to enjoy the rain as I enjoyed your poem.
Thank you very much.
Nothing can beat the rain!
In my opinion, its the most beautiful thing.
Snow comes after that, but snow is cold.
Very nice poem.
Thank you very much. I also like the snow. Snow creates silence, almost the opposite of rain. Take care.
S R Forbes
I like how the poem itself, visually, looks a bit like a rain drop. Well done!
thank you very much :).
I liked this. Could feel the rain.
This is GREAT. I loved it. I definitly felt the rain on this one.lol.
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