Winter Wonderland
Poem by: Eraser
Snow blankets all
like confectionary sugar -
a fantasy land.
Hydrants are toadstools;
we walk on the clouds.
The light is different,
whiter, brighter.
The day is quiet,
sound swallowed
in a blanket of powder.
The road is still dark.
But for awhile
at least
We are in a different land.
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Gives a surreal image, pretty.
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thanks!
i like it. your poetry has a.. well, some sort of beauty about it. i can't quite put my finger to it, but i like it (:
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thanks.
Enjoyed your poem and photos very much! Very unique combination and most effective. Thanks for sharing your fine poetry and photographs. Happy writing.....Jerry
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thank you!
Nice to read a diffrent poem.....Really great read the pictures bring it alive..... Have a happy day in the snow....Would like it to snow here as i am a big kid at heart.......Thanks for sharing this experience Juliet
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thanks! the snow is great. sledding this weekend.
Wonderful poem! The photos were a perfect touch!
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thanks! we enjoyed taking them.
A marvellous read...felt like I was there.
A great place to be.
Nice one Eraser.
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thank you!
Lovely poem, perfect at this time of year ~ Nixie
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Thanks Nixie.
I wish it could be as beautiful outside near me as this poem depicts. I have snow, but it's so cold out there your eyelids would freeze to your eyeballs, heh.
The pictures really add to it, but your imagery was excellent in that it would have worked even without them :)
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thanks. sounds like your in the arctic. i remember i once traveled to canada and i couldn't believe how cold it was. -20 F. we had to take a taxi to go a block.
hope it gets warmer for you.
its beautiful, i wish i could just go into the scene and melt (but it'd be too cold for that... hehe) i enjoyed it. :D
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thanks!
Yes I too love the snow youve captured that almost lonley but serene feeling that its white blanket brings, lovely writing love how you compared snow to confectionary and hydrants to toadstools it make me almost feel the place was alive well done!!1
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thanks for your comment!
Since I remembered I thought I would check out the snow poem you mentioned. I thought the pictures went well with the poem and gave the fantasy view a realistic view as well. I enjoyed it. Thanks :)
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Thanks for the comment.
The imagery is really nice. I like it.
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thanks!
Very nice piece. I always viewed it as a wonderland rather than a depressing scene :) So pure...
You have to show me how you put your pictures up like that. Is there a site where you can upload to and then use the url to put into your work?
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Thanks. You can use photobucket. Then, you can create slideshows or just upload the pictures. They supply you with the link.
Greetings,
Wow ... a winter wonderdland in your own front yard. I am jealous. Your, so eloquently written poem, describes the gorgeous scenery you have provided to a tee. Kudos to you!
Best regards,
Cindy G
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thanks cindy! it reallyl was beautiful although it's all gone now.
i love it-i love the wispy feeling i get.
:)
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thanks!
I Like your descriptions in this piece, Winter is a different wonderland for all. well done.
hey, i came to read this again!-it keeps making me come back to feel the wonder!
:)
What a wonderful poem this is Eraser! thanks* katie
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thanks katie!
That's so beautiful! I love it!
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Thanks so much!
Great poem - loved the toadstool hydrants.
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Thanks October O!
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