Void of Ourselves

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

I wrote this when my ex and I broke up.

You are restless, wandering

portaled hallways. Dark

visions cloud flurried thoughts

wingless flight to

somewhere, the trophy of

your race constrained by


As I drift in an empty void. I see your

face in my eyes. My heart

wonders through my thoughts,

flying on love and hate

I feel, the feeling of what

we will never feel together

sacred love.

As we wander in our own worlds

through our thoughts. Colliding

thoughts of an unsure destiny,

we'll fly on separate

paths, apathy for benevolence

is how we shall survive,

nocturnal darkness.

As I open my eyes I see, something

drifting together. The clouds

fade away from my heart,

my life begins to

develop, a new form of

misery. As I weep you shall

cry for me.

We are together at last, misery

trapped. We're lost in

the space of a second

where are we at

now. As sorrow fades from us

we become as one together

in our misery.

Submitted: March 20, 2009

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Sabrina moonlight

so sad but yet i love it.

Thu, May 5th, 2011 3:46am


Love can only be obtained after one has truly experienced deep sorrow and sadness.

Sat, December 3rd, 2011 9:17am

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