Yearning learns the Truth
Poem by: eternally depressed
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The girl ran to her room and silently cried, But she remembered his love croon and the tears start to dry. She wanted to be
with him, and he with her, This is how she wants her life, She's absolutely Sure.
She climbs out of her window, And runs across the moor, She remains unnoticed, And creeps up to his door. She was about to
knock, but something made her slow, She peeks into the window's block, And gasped at what was to show.
She ran crying, Back to her house, She was foolish for trying, and steps in quiet as a mouse. She creeps up to her dwelling,
Slashes her wrist twice, She watched, tears started welling, And thought of all his lies.
Submitted: December 07, 2008
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i agree with the man (or woman?) above me. good work. sorry if this actually happened to you, by the way.
Sun, December 7th, 2008 10:22pm
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it didn't happen to me, but i had a dream about it.
thanx.
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imjustme213
Well done, the poem shows the emotion, and I could really see the image. However I must ask, why do you have a line throughtout the words, is there a point to it, a meaning, or is it simply there?
Sun, December 7th, 2008 10:12pmAuthor
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idk i think it looks cool
Sun, December 7th, 2008 4:43pm