When i see you standing there,
your arrogance make me despair,
you act so sleek and clean and cool,
you don't see that you act the fool.
And yet when i try to put you straight,
asking you to wash your evils from your plate,
you laugh at me and smirk and grin,
but you don't know the shit you're in.
You think you know that you''ll be fine,
but the last laugh will always be mine,
see you soon my haughty frind,
i know your downfall is round the bend.
Submitted: October 20, 2010
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good on ya! if this is for an individual then its just perfect.love the rhyming and the story to it all.
a class poem.
nighthawk-:)
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Thankyou means a lot and yeah it is to a particular person... but i suppose ne1 can use it if they are in a similar situation.
Wed, October 20th, 2010 6:55am
Also a strong piece, I really like poetry and music where the speaker absolutely flames someone who they know to be in the wrong. It really is a shame that such heartfelt and cruel words always seem to fall on deaf ears :/
Thu, August 18th, 2011 4:51am
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definatly i don't talk to this person anymore, although i'd love for her to read this :D x
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I liked your rhymes here a lot. Good job.
Wed, October 20th, 2010 11:15amAuthor
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thakyou means alot!!
Wed, October 20th, 2010 6:56am