years a way

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Non-Fiction  |  House: Booksie Classic

about a day that seems like it could be soon but its no were near.

Today is okay

The world is here to play

in the day we play

at night we write

here we start the day

with every play we stay

and with every night we wright the years away


Submitted: November 14, 2010

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vanya shekhar

short and sweet....like it...:)

Sun, November 28th, 2010 12:50am

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Thank you

Sun, November 28th, 2010 9:01am

Erynn Louviaite

Interesting. Not bad.

Sun, November 28th, 2010 7:20pm

Even Fin

Thank you Erynn Louviaite

Mon, November 29th, 2010 1:57pm

SDCD7

that was good, it contains hidden meanings :)

Wed, December 8th, 2010 7:43am

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Thank you so much that was my first pome

Thu, December 9th, 2010 6:01am

Even Fin

I mean poem my frist poem

Thu, December 9th, 2010 2:02pm

Adelaide Chrome

Nyc. Though it's short it has a good consistency. Like it:)

Fri, March 25th, 2011 6:51pm

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Thank you for for the comment

Wed, March 30th, 2011 7:23am

Scrawls and Doodles

subtle hints leave us to imagine wider horizons... a good piece, Fin :)

like!

Wed, May 25th, 2011 8:01am

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Thank you

Wed, May 25th, 2011 1:24pm

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