Her Remedy

jmurch

If you are writing this about that someone special than special they truly are. It is a fine example of love in a poem so eloquently spoken by a master of words such as yourself. I hope if it is written about a specific person that they get to see this majestic ode to your love first hand. I also enjoy the bold type used to add emphasis to specifically chosen spots to add a voice to what you are saying. It gives the piece a wonderful visual and kisses the reader with the passionate emotions you felt as you plugged each intricate piece of the puzzle. You never cease to amaze me with the true magnitude of your incredible talented ability which is almost a godsend. You may think this comment is too much but after reading such an outstanding poem, it is I who falls short. You are on a whole other plane when it comes to your writing. Without a doubt, you are one of the most amazingly spoken writers to ever share their work on this site. You are a golden treasure. Are you blushing? If so, than awesome. Your writing deserves strong recognition. There is only a few writers I have found to pull their weight each and every time they sit in front of their keyboard or within their notebooks. Historians will find your notes very valuable indeed someday. I suspect you will be featured again someday soon. This is just another amazing work by you. You always find innovative ways to exceed all expectations. I look forward to seeing the bestselling literature to come from you someday. And make sure you let the special person see this. It will definitely make them smile. Wow! By the way, one of my other favorite talents on this site is my current link in my profile. Do you ever take a break from creating such phenomenal work. Lol. Either way, keep bringing it. I will keep coming back for more.

jmurch

Don't murder me for such a big comment. Your writing is just so freakin good!

Maggie Williams

This is such a beautiful, heartfelt poem.You obviously love this person very much.Your diction was very elegant, and the rhymes were perfect. Wonderful job!

Hanorbi

This is really gorgeous, I hope whoever you wrote this for sees it or that you give it to them in some form. So well presented and professional, it's insane. High-quality work, Megan. Rare to find here.

Melancholic Wisdom

I was so excited to see that you posted a new poem that I read it almost the second that I saw it. This was absolutely beautiful in every single way. If you have someone like this, never let them go because they truly are someone special, and people like that don't come around often. Absolutely beautiful all around. Great work love

Aditya Kumar Saroj

What a fine piece of work! Hats off, Megan. Brilliant. Truly for someone special.

Alex The shadow girl

Wow.. You really wrote this for someone? That is so freaking amazing. Truly wonderful. And while reading this poem, I totally felt something. It's so beautiful.

Amy R. Beckett

First off, I love the repetition in the first line of each stanza (he is the, he is a, etc.) - it makes me think that the speaker is gradually realising just how important 'he' is to her, and it's more than just the chemistry they have, it's the way they truly love each other. The way you've made certain words bold is very clever too :)

Spyguy

He, whoever He is, will be proud as punch, & tickled pink with this glowing prose of praise! I'd love to feel that I've been able to inspire these types of feelings & thoughts in the one woman who I have given my life to, my name to, my body to, & all of my loving & concern...
Since she's not a writer, a poet, a spokeswoman, or person of many words, I'll never know if I've been successful in my efforts! Thank you, none-the-less, for your poetry inspires me to continue to strive to be proactive in my efforts to be the kind of man that this type of praise could be written about! Thank you for being a friend!

Spyguy

I agree wholeheartedly with Jmurch in his first comment posted here to this work! His words to your ears, my heart touched by your work!