Beats Louder

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Poetry Island

What happens to a heart when it's broken?

A broken heart beats softly in a chest

A new heart now comes to rest

Made of stone

Made of ice

A solid heart beats louder than the rest


Submitted: July 08, 2015

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H. Adams

This is awesome! That last line is so true it's unreal. You know, you are insanely good at writing shorter poems and bringing a ton to them. Keep it up!

Wed, July 8th, 2015 3:52am

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Wow. You really think that?
I will.

Tue, July 7th, 2015 9:56pm

Matthew Trinma

Enjoyed this

Wed, July 8th, 2015 8:43am

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Thank you M. T.!

Thu, July 9th, 2015 2:06pm

quetzala

Beautiful

Thu, July 30th, 2015 3:05am

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Thanks!

Wed, July 29th, 2015 10:02pm

Jack Motley

Whoo! Quick, clean, rhythm and rhyme. I had a good time reading this piece of poetry most sublime. (I'm also a poetic hack, so don't mind the hack response :) )

~Jack

Thu, July 30th, 2015 3:07pm

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Thanks again! :)

Thu, July 30th, 2015 8:11am

hullabaloo22

Short and to the point. Great.

Mon, May 23rd, 2016 9:07pm

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Thank you! I love it when I'm appreciated for doing something that makes me happy!

Mon, May 23rd, 2016 2:09pm

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