Moonbeams

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Poetry Island


If you could ask for anything, what would it be?


Moonbeams

If you could

would you ask

for moonbeams

in a heart-shaped glass

for sun-rays on a silver sea

or would you choose

to ask for me


Submitted: July 07, 2015

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SaraEloyce

I like this poem, it's lovely! :D

Tue, July 7th, 2015 4:49am

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Thank you for becoming my first-ever fan and commenting my poem!

Tue, July 7th, 2015 8:23pm

H. Adams

This is so simple yet so beautiful. Interesting imagery and really quite pretty. Well done!

Tue, July 7th, 2015 5:32am

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This is so awesome. You commented on my poem. Thanks!

Tue, July 7th, 2015 8:22pm

Matthew Trinma

I liked this

Tue, July 7th, 2015 9:37am

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Thanks!

Tue, July 7th, 2015 8:21pm

Jeff Bezaire

I like it. Beauty can be judged is so many different ways, which makes it difficult to choose what is more beautiful, which do we prefer? Great poem.

Mon, July 27th, 2015 5:46pm

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Thank you!

Mon, July 27th, 2015 9:08pm

Wyatt Collins

That is a very beautiful poem! You have real talent. Thank you for reading my story as well.

Wed, July 29th, 2015 12:33pm

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Thank you... and your welcome!

Wed, July 29th, 2015 10:53am

quetzala

Love it!! This is my favorite so far but all of your work is so good

Thu, July 30th, 2015 3:07am

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Thank you- this was actually the first thing I posted on booksie. I'm glad you liked it!

Wed, July 29th, 2015 10:03pm

brucek

liked the imagery and alliteration. way to go using poetic devices!

Thu, July 30th, 2015 2:50pm

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Thank you!

Thu, July 30th, 2015 8:09am

Jack Motley

Beautifully quick poem, Evie!

I'm so glad you left a comment on one of my works, leading me back to your stuff. I see real talent here. Must read more...

~Jack

Thu, July 30th, 2015 3:06pm

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Thank you- I liked what you write, I'm glad you liked what I write.

Thu, July 30th, 2015 8:10am

Melancholic Wisdom

I like this. Simple yet effective. Great work! :D

Thu, July 30th, 2015 7:40pm

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Thank you!

Fri, July 31st, 2015 1:50pm

Tylers conscience

I read this out loud like 5 times haha. Love it.

Thu, July 30th, 2015 8:57pm

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*laughing* Thank you!

Fri, July 31st, 2015 1:54pm

Kaito Shiba

Very beautiful and haunting imagery! Strong and simple message that comes through powerfully. Beautiful!

Sun, August 2nd, 2015 3:34pm

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Thank you!

Sun, August 2nd, 2015 10:57am

Mr Watson

Short and sweet and very neat ! just the way I like em : )

Sat, August 22nd, 2015 4:51pm

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Thank you.

Sat, August 22nd, 2015 7:24pm

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