Wonderful... Wonderland

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Just like Alice...

I bet you had no idea

that in my wonderland, you and I

we dance

protected by our daisy guards

we spend our days

in sunshine rays

and chase the rabbit that keeps time

the hatter teases us

as we nap, but at the end

it shall only begin

for we do not follow the red queens shrine



Submitted: October 20, 2015

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Jeff Bezaire

I like the idea of daisy guards. It's as clever as card guards, but lovelier. Great line: "but at the end it shall only begin". A lovely poem, Evie.

Wed, October 21st, 2015 3:28pm


Thank you, I got this idea by reading a poem by Hanorbi, so thank you to Hanorbi. This poem is based off of Alice in Wonderland, so it has to be good:)

Thu, October 22nd, 2015 3:05pm

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