The Bloody Revenge

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Action and Adventure  |  House: Booksie Classic

The leader of a small village named Marshall was sitting by the fire with his wife Brittany and talking about the crimes that had committed lately. He used to tell everything to his wife and despite his honesty and sincerity, Brittany was using his power for her own aims. She was never letting her husband to decide what to do or what to say, in other words, she was leading the village.

 

THE BLOODY REVENGE

 

The leader of a small village named Marshall was sitting by the fire with his wife Brittany and talking about the crimes that had committed lately. He used to tell everything to his wife and despite his honesty and sincerity, Brittany was using his power for her own aims. She was never letting her husband to decide what to do or what to say, in other words, she was leading the village.

 

Back to what they were talking about, Brittany was telling him what to do, as it had always been. She thought that they should stop the crimes because the crimes would occur more if they would not quit. Marshall was getting tired of their speech and went to his room to enjoy one of his night full of nightmares.

 

In the morning, everybody woke up with the horrible scream of Brittany. When the maids got into her room, she was running around and crying. She told that she saw someone out of the window who was trying to get in. She tried to describe him, but she couldn’t see him exactly because of his mask. She only saw that he was tall and huge, and she saw his eyes. His eyes were light blue, almost grey, and he had a deep look. Then one of the maids called Marshall and told him about the happening.

Marshall was angry with himself because he couldn’t prevent the criminal. So he started to think about sollutions. As the days passed, the crimes started to occur more and more. The criminal was a thief and also a serial killer. The number of dead was increasing. The citizens were protesting pleading him to quit. The time that they had untill they would get murdered was growing short. The horror in the town could even be smelled.

 

As Marshall was looking for sollutions, many suspects were coming up to Brittany’s mind. Her old fiance’s eyes were appearing in everywhere she looked. These eyes were the same eyes as the criminal’s. She hoped that the criminal was not him.

 

After days, Marshall found a way to find the criminal. He stopped all of the enters and exits to the town and he called all men to the guest house in the village. He also called his wife and wanted her to figure out which one was the criminal. All of them were put in a room one by one, and Brittany looked at all of them.

She was terrified, she was thinking about the possibilities. If he were her old fiance, she was dead, because he was a psycho and he could do anything. She left him in the morning of their wedding day, so he was mad at her. While she was thinking about these, another man got into the room.

 

The man who was in didn’t look at her even for once, so they forced him to look at her. Suddenly, he looked into her eyes and in that moment, her breathe stopped. That was him! Noone understood what was going on. They looked at each other for a  minute and in a heart beat, he took out a knife and stabbed her by her heart. Noone could stop him, but after he stabbed her, a police killed him with a gun. They were both dead and their bodies were lying on the floor, in blood. That was revenge of her old fiance for leaving him and marrying with a man who had money.

 

Ezgi Ya?mur KIRLANGIÇ


Submitted: April 08, 2012

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pdlodge

this is excellent if english isn't your first language.

Sun, May 13th, 2012 10:34am

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