ALWAYS SMILE

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

The only comment is "Always Smile".

 

Always Smile

Wide sweet smile

Knocking on my face

Is not for a while

 

Like an immortal sun

And gaiety will

I wish it never burn

 

Have power to hale

And happiness to sell

Ever seen a smiling whale

 

Smile o smile

You find your own way

Seems travelling a long mile

 

Decorate the face

So beautifully as lace

 

You win one’s heart

A relation

A war

Oh! Baby you are so smart

Hope you stay forever

 Make one’s happy ever and ever

 

 


Submitted: April 26, 2012

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Hoke

"Decorate the face so beautifully as lace" i love that.
this is awesome.

Tue, May 15th, 2012 8:05am

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Thank you so much.

Tue, May 15th, 2012 7:23am

JoelatRpg

I like smiles! When you smile at someone, you make them feel good. Good job:)

Sat, July 27th, 2013 4:56am

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Thank you

Sat, July 27th, 2013 9:00am

Zayn Ul Abidin

Smile is a very strong emoyion and the description of smile here is just pure truth... Keep up the good work.

Sun, July 28th, 2013 11:42am

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Thank you Zayn.

Sun, July 28th, 2013 7:58am

Emmett Cohl

Smiles can fix everything. Well, maybe not everything, but pretty darn close to everything :) I really like the description of a smile here, you did very well.
~Emily

Wed, August 14th, 2013 3:10pm

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Thanks Emily. *_^

Wed, August 14th, 2013 12:08pm

39strypes

Nice use of words, I saw creativity in depth.
Well done once more.

Sun, October 27th, 2013 11:00pm

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Thanks.

Fri, November 1st, 2013 8:53pm

Bella Writing

I like the creativity you put in the poem :) It's very good :)

Sat, June 11th, 2016 9:55am

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Thank you Bella.

Sun, June 12th, 2016 2:30am

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