Blue Eyes Girl
Helding head high,
Rays reflect the window glass,
Sparkled the Blue Eyes,
At the corner she seems,
Dreaming the sky,
With glamour and sparkling eyes,
I evade,
But she distracted my mind.
Now I am in flame,
She turned to leave,
Perhaps, was three.
She walked ahead of me.
My face, void of all intrest,
Yes! She, whom
I fall in love with.
Submitted: April 26, 2012
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I could feel the emotions myself, very good poem! It was very sweet and I really enjoyed reading it.
Sun, July 28th, 2013 6:15pm
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Thanks!
Sun, July 28th, 2013 11:54am
This poem is sweet and romantic:) Thanks for sharing:)
Mon, July 29th, 2013 12:09am
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Most welcome.
Sun, July 28th, 2013 9:43pm
Love at first sight, nice one.
Cool and romantic.
Keep up the good work.
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Glad u like it.
Fri, November 1st, 2013 8:53pmFacebook Comments
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"It is a poem about a boy who describe his feelings of love through her eye." I'm not too sure what you mean by this. Is the boy describing what he's feeling by looking in her eyes? I'm probably reading it the wrong way, but I hope you can correct me.
Mon, March 25th, 2013 4:00pmThis was sweet. It's cute and the words flowed well together. I like the fact it doesn't rhyme, because some people think poetry needs to rhyme to be a poem. It doesn't and I find it much easier to get words down on a piece of paper if they don't rhyme. Good job :)
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Yes!
Tue, March 26th, 2013 8:59amThe boy fall in love........ when he look the sparkling
eye of the girl...
And thanks 4 reading...