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It is a poem about a boy who describe his feelings of love through her eye.


Blue Eyes Girl

Helding head high,

Rays reflect the window glass,

Sparkled the Blue Eyes,

At the corner she seems,

Dreaming the sky,

With glamour and sparkling eyes,

I evade,

But she distracted my mind.


Now I am in flame,

She turned to leave,

Perhaps, was three.

She walked ahead of me.

My face, void of all intrest,

Yes! She, whom

I fall in love with.


Submitted: April 26, 2012

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"It is a poem about a boy who describe his feelings of love through her eye." I'm not too sure what you mean by this. Is the boy describing what he's feeling by looking in her eyes? I'm probably reading it the wrong way, but I hope you can correct me.
This was sweet. It's cute and the words flowed well together. I like the fact it doesn't rhyme, because some people think poetry needs to rhyme to be a poem. It doesn't and I find it much easier to get words down on a piece of paper if they don't rhyme. Good job :)

Mon, March 25th, 2013 4:00pm


The boy fall in love........ when he look the sparkling
eye of the girl...
And thanks 4 reading...

Tue, March 26th, 2013 8:59am

David S Grayson

I could feel the emotions myself, very good poem! It was very sweet and I really enjoyed reading it.

Sun, July 28th, 2013 6:15pm



Sun, July 28th, 2013 11:54am


This poem is sweet and romantic:) Thanks for sharing:)

Mon, July 29th, 2013 12:09am


Most welcome.

Sun, July 28th, 2013 9:43pm


Love at first sight, nice one.
Cool and romantic.
Keep up the good work.

Sun, October 27th, 2013 10:58pm


Glad u like it.

Fri, November 1st, 2013 8:53pm

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