Flying balloon

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

it is a poem about a balloon who never know his destiny

Flying Balloon

Up in the air,

Shiny scarlet looks tiny,

From the earth,

Never know the destiny,

Never know the way

It flies,flies and flies,

Out set freedom,

Like a message,

The solitude in floating clouds,

Frolicking went on and on,

Seems like a gaiety flower,

In the heaven,

Never know how come this far,

The endless journey,

Dreaming like heaven,

Lost balloon,

The only balloon in the air.


Submitted: April 25, 2012

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memoryblue

I love the last line especially. I can relate. what I take from it too though is that fact that you have chosen the balloon to be shiny red,scarlet. Therefore attractive, promiseful, bright.I might find it's way home afterall. Whether you meant to or not, this is a very a clever and yet small detail. Perfect :)

Wed, April 25th, 2012 8:18pm

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Thanks for ur comment.

Mon, April 30th, 2012 7:22am

David S Grayson

I've always wonder what happens with balloons in sky, and having this poem was a great alternative. It was very simple but very beautiful and I love it because that balloon could represent anything and anyone.

Sun, July 28th, 2013 6:18pm

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Thank you so much.And I too wonder where does it go and what happen up in the sky, So I wrote it,tried to put my words.

Sun, July 28th, 2013 11:53am

HeyBey

How sad...but very true. Could easily relate with people as well. Not knowing their destiny. Nice inner meaning.

Wed, September 18th, 2013 7:38pm

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Thanks a lot for your valuable comment.

Fri, September 20th, 2013 7:50am

Shekhar Srivastava

poem with a realistic meaning..balloon can be compared with the person himself..it reminded me of the poems of Robert Frost lol

Sat, June 7th, 2014 9:22am

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Hehe. Thanks once again.

Sat, June 7th, 2014 8:35am

angelique30

I loved this, a real nice perspective of the balloon. The balloon you can even compare to a person very realistic thank you

Mon, April 18th, 2016 10:13am

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Thanks so much.And yes one can relate it to person too.

Mon, April 18th, 2016 7:34am

bloodman

some nice lines there : )

Thu, September 1st, 2016 10:36am

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Thank you.

Thu, September 1st, 2016 10:35am

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