Love Smoke Hate

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Flash Fiction  |  House: Booksie Classic

tale of smoke

smoker o sweet smoker

i m a cigarette

& ill die for ur pleasure

our relation is unknown

people say i m poison

you lite me

i delight u

you suck me

i kiss u

some consider me as foe

other take me in joy

we love one another

but still there s confusion

you crush me

when i m done

that time think

you remember my hazard

but you can,t quite

you have cross thwart.

(fallen words)

 

 

 


Submitted: April 10, 2012

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girly1986

nice one buddy! i hate smoking hehe...but your poem is a good start...
maybe you can read some of my works and tell me what you think :D

Wed, April 11th, 2012 1:20am

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thanks

Wed, April 11th, 2012 11:14pm

hotstory4you

that's a nice poem, use of words is beautiful and the concept of this poem is too good. great job

Wed, April 11th, 2012 8:51pm

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thanks

Wed, April 11th, 2012 11:13pm

MissDayDreamer15

I love this poem, idk but i relate to it somehow :))

Mon, June 11th, 2012 10:54am

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thank u very much

Mon, June 11th, 2012 9:36pm

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