The day u will stop loving me

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

sweet panic poem for love

MY Fear

The day you will stop loving me

world is not worthing for me

i will scold on my luck

my luck will keep scolding on me

with you i can win

without you its sin

spring will give only pleasure

if you are with flower

i cant live without you

And I am not a lier

You live in my heart

I will take care of you even in dark

o dear just keep me near

with the help of your love

i will overcome this fear


Submitted: April 21, 2012

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Courtney Fields

This is sweet :)

Sat, April 21st, 2012 2:19pm

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Thanks, keep reading.

Sun, April 22nd, 2012 6:21am

hotstory4you

I like this poem, this totally relate with us and how we feel for that one person. good job mate.

Tue, April 24th, 2012 10:46am

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thasnkx keep yourself updated

Tue, April 24th, 2012 4:12am

girly1986

nice poem! love love loev is on the air! :D

Thu, April 26th, 2012 2:07am

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thanks dear

Thu, April 26th, 2012 3:45am

OpenMinds

That's a very sweet poem :)
Really like it :)
Keep writing :)

Tue, May 1st, 2012 11:33am

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thanks for the comment keep reading

Wed, May 2nd, 2012 12:21am

KennyGirl

WOW! THE POEM REMINDS ME OF MY PRESENT
THANKS AND DON'T FORGET TO BE MY FAN.

Wed, May 2nd, 2012 7:49pm

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Thanks keep reading

Wed, May 2nd, 2012 12:52pm

InkSplodges

Really good :) I enjoyed it.

Fri, May 4th, 2012 2:34pm

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thankx keep reading

Fri, May 4th, 2012 8:23am

parul

Simple, sweet :),

Sun, May 13th, 2012 6:21am

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thanks a lot, keep reading my poems

Sun, May 13th, 2012 3:19am

Antoine Watson I

I can relate and that's probably why this one captures my heart and attention. Love is a powerful emotion and can make you feel all of the above. I really enjoyed this one as well :)

Thu, June 7th, 2012 1:36pm

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thank u very much

Fri, June 8th, 2012 8:26pm

Ellen Michelle

Awww...This poem is so sweet

Tue, June 26th, 2012 7:49pm

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thank u dear

Wed, June 27th, 2012 2:57am

Insane Membrane

thats cute ... a worry for us all

Thu, July 12th, 2012 7:25pm

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thankx for reading

Fri, July 13th, 2012 8:23pm

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