Can angels bleed?
Is this the blood i feel on me?
Why cant i feel anything but pain?
Why has my life turned into agony?
Im stuck in this black cell
No one hears me screaming!
is it all in my head?
When will i try to find the missing peices of me?
Ive become a lost soul
my life is just black now
I try to believe in something
But there is no God
He abandoned me long ago
Im hopeless
Ive tried to change the way you see me
I try to send the pain below
I feel like im in an inturnal black hole
Why do i stay here?
When im just slowly dying anyway?
When will i try to find the missing peices of me?
Ive become a lost soul
my life is just black now
I try to believe in something
But there is no God
He abandoned me long ago
Im hopeless
No one can help me now
No one can save me
Why do you fear me?
Im not trying to scare you
Im just me
When will i try to find the missing peices of me?
Ive become a lost soul
my life is just black now
I try to believe in something
But there is no God
He abandoned me long ago
Im hopeless
Submitted: August 22, 2007
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StevenRitenourII
A very intimate piece. One that portrays a common heart ache of much of human kind. As for subject matter and honesty I don't believe it could have been better.
Wed, August 22nd, 2007 8:07amThough in presentation this piece is less admirable. Spell check would be a suggestion. The rhythm is all over the place, but that is permissable because of the intimate nature of the poem/song. Yet the diction and form I believe could use some attention.
This piece definitely has great potential and is admirably honest.
Yours truly,
SR2
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yea i didnt use spell check because i get lazt with using punctuation marks and all that. but hey im a teenager!! lol
Wed, August 22nd, 2007 1:11am