The demons inside my head

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

sometimes when we feel the world has gone all wrong with us we should close our eyes and look inside us instead, for a while and its then that we realize that we have the power to take the reign of things and choose the way the world treats us....

Tell them i am not gonna take it any more

Tell them its time for the final show

That black stuff goes on creeping to my very core

But now i am not gonna take it any more


There is always a choice they say

And i have chosen my way

That way is not always filled with lights

 But then its for those pitch black lanes i say

U will see urself inthem the best u may

They will show u ur real soul

But dont get afraid for thats not ur goal

For i have chosen as i said

To face the demons inside  my head


Submitted: April 20, 2012

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that's amazing! you're very talented. Your name caught my eye because that's the name of a short story i wrote. You're very good, keep writing!

Fri, April 20th, 2012 6:37pm


thank u soo much. its d first time i ever wrote in any online site. all this time all my poems would just rot in my means a lot to meee. my frst evr comment.

Fri, April 20th, 2012 7:23pm

glitter snow426

so cool, just one certain explosion, TRULY DEEP, INTENSE, CLEVERLY DONE!

Sat, April 21st, 2012 10:07pm


thanks so much

Sun, April 22nd, 2012 4:01am


oh, this is really a good poem my friend :)

Sun, May 20th, 2012 7:44am


thanks for reading.

Sun, May 20th, 2012 1:31am

Ian Dawn

Oh yeak I can relate to this one and again I will say it great poetry comes from the pain and hurt as much as from the love we feel.

Mon, September 10th, 2012 2:49pm


i write poetry when I cannot talk about my feelings in simple lines to someone.Its more like an outlet for me and thanks for your appreciation.

Tue, September 11th, 2012 10:58am

Colin David

Dark but nice :) I think we all can go to those places at times where the dark is preferable to the light and being alone is preferable to being with someone. I do it quite often. Sometimes I think its the only thing that keeps me sane! Keep writing, friend! You inspire!

Mon, April 15th, 2013 4:09am


thanks for reading my poem,For me it is the dark that makes me write so yes it is my inspiration.

Mon, April 15th, 2013 12:31am

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