Hurt is poem about the struggles of life that are made by others choices.

your mistake is like a knife,

stabbing my heart over and over again.

your heart is cold,

because your mind is cruel.

you cried and said you were sorry.

i didn't think you would lie right to my face.

you once told me you wanted to be an actor,

when you did this you got your chance.

you thought you'd hurt only one,

you'd see you hurt many at second glance. waking up in the morningI would wish it were a dream.

my life is like the water,

beaing washed down the drain.

my heart is like a cookie,

crumbling in you grasp.

my love for is no more,

it was there one day but now as i can finnally see who you are it is extinct.

Submitted: June 28, 2008

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Aww, that's so sad. Very nice poem.

Sat, June 28th, 2008 7:35pm



Sat, June 28th, 2008 9:32pm


:( wow, thats kinda sad, but rlly good! Keep it up!

Sat, June 28th, 2008 9:20pm


thanx the best insperation is from life and that could be anything because who knows what life is.

Sat, June 28th, 2008 9:29pm


though this poem is really sad, u wrote it really well and kept the pain on the surface. awesome poem!

Sun, June 29th, 2008 3:23pm


im glad that you liked it

Tue, July 1st, 2008 5:38pm

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