What The Eyes Say: sungeminnie15's challenge.

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Challenge.

 

What The Eyes Say:
The eyes say yes
The eyes say no
They always tell him he has to go....and when he doesn't leave – or at least, that's how it seems, the eyes aren't happy either.
She stands up, with sorrow in her eyes.
She knows he will come back tomorrow.
As the door slams and he walks away, something wet comes out of those pretty eyes.
What is it? Tears I see.
I see tears in her eyes. They are not only eyes.


Submitted: July 23, 2009

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sungemini15

IM SORRY BUT THIS IS A NICE POEM AND ALL BUT I JUST POSTED YOUR PICTURE ON MY CHALLENGE... SOMEONE HAS ALREADY HAD THIS PICTURE... CHECK OUT THE PICTURE I HAVE POSTED FOR YOU AND IF YOU WANT TO DO IT LET ME KNOW...

mini :)

Thu, July 23rd, 2009 11:02pm

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Oh ok thanks. Sorry.






Good luck xoxo.
God bless xoxo.

Thu, July 23rd, 2009 9:27pm

angellynn

Good Luck in the challenge. I too have joined. So i better tighten up. This is wonderful!

Angellynn:D

Fri, July 24th, 2009 9:25pm

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Thanks lol.







Good luck xoxo.
God bless xoxo.

Fri, July 24th, 2009 5:53pm

justin

well done, quite a nice poem. the eyes are the window to the soul.

Sat, July 25th, 2009 11:25am

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Yup thanks aww I appreciate that.







Good luck xoxo.
God bless xoxo.

Sat, July 25th, 2009 12:13pm

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