Alienation: Part 1

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Action and Adventure  |  House: Booksie Classic
A teenager and his bestfriend discover something out of this world.

(Alienation: Part 2)PUBLISHING SOON.

Submitted: June 18, 2011

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"What's going on back there, Hugh?" "What? Nothing's going on Mr. Frisk! Absolutely nothing." Ryan Hugh said. "Oh, should I go back there just in case?" Mr. Frisk asked. "No, you shouldn't! Carry on please?" Ryan said. "Very well. Carry on Gordon." This was show and tell and it was almost Ryan's turn. Gordon had a piece of old paper, I mean, who would take that? What a joke. "Thank you Gordon, for your... Interesting find behind your toilet bowl... Alright class! It's Ryan Hugh's turn." The bell rings and Ryan was relieved. "You got away this time Hugh, I'll be seeing what you have for me after Tuesday!" Mr. Frisk reminded. "Yes, Frisk." Ryan says and walks out quickly. "So! How'd it go in there, bud?" Tiffany asked, Tiffany was Ryan's bestfriend and everyone doubted that they were just friends. "Pretty good, but the bell cut me off before I could even show and tell my stuff!" Ryan complains. "Oh Ryan, well, see you tomorrow, I've got a bunch of evil children to babysit today!" Tiffany says and walks away with a wave. Ryan waves back and heads home.

"Oh lord the pie! the PIE! Fifi!" Dad shouts. "The pie? Ha ha, What pie?" Ryan asks, shutting the door. "Your ugly dog ate my cranberry pie!" Dad says. "Fifi isn't ugly, dad. Mom can always make another cranberry pie for you." Ryan says. "Well, that doesn't make it any different! This was the last freakin' piece and I was devouring it with passion, until that teeny puff of hunger ate it all!" Dad says. "Don't verbally abuse my dog, daddy-o. You might think he's ugly, but watch out! He might be the most handsome dog in the dog world." Ryan says. "Yeah, say it all you want! I'm going to watch Dr. Phil to solve my problems!" Dad says. "Dad, you're so strange sometimes." "Oh yeah? That's what you think, but in the strange world, I'm actually perfectly NORMALLE." Dad says. "That's because you're strange. Ha, I'm going upstairs." Ryan says.

Ryan gets to his room and sees a strange black piece of cloth peeking out of the attic in the ceiling."What's this?" Ryan says as he tries to yank the fabric. The door falls out and the cloth comes along with it. A logo is on the black cloth, "Fifty-First? Where'd this come from? I've never had this up there before." Ryanthinks. Just before Ryan climbs the ladder to the attic, Tiffany came over. "Ryan! Tiff's here!" Dad says. "Yeah! Tell her to come up here!" Ryan says. "I better not catch you both being unfriendly up there!"Dad says. "Whatever!" Ryan shouts. Tiffany enters and says, "What's up Ry? I'm not babysitting anymore, their mom came back early." "Uh, I found this thing hanging out of my attic, but the thing is, it's not mine or anybody's that lives here." Ryan said. "Maybe the people who lived here before you?" Tiffany suggests. "Nah, we built this! Wanna go check it out with me?" Ryan asks. "No duh bro!" Tiffany answers. "Let's go then!" Ryan says, climbing the ladder.

They got to the attic, finding a a toy ball. But it wasn't those rubber balls that children play with. It was one hundered percent steel. "Whoa! This thing is heavy! And the bolts are fused shut! We will never know what's in here." Ryan said ashe handed it toTiffany. As tiffany was about to look at the ball, she fell out of the attic and the ball along with her. She was unconcious. "Tiffany!" Ryan shouts and rushes next to her. Her fluttering eyes were stopped. Her smile was hurt. He liveliness turned dark and gray. Ryan carried her tohis bed and laid her there. Ryan stared at her beauty and wished she would wake upsoon.

It was only ten minutes, but it felt like forever. Tiffany soon woke up and suddenly hugged Ryan. "I'm so glad I didn't die, I would've been so sad." Tiffany said, hugging Ryan tightly. She let go and stared at him, and Ryan kissed her lips softly like it was fragile. They've never been this close, it felt like they were meant to be together. Tiffany smiled and asked. "Let's try to open the ball, even though it seems impossible."


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