From "Before The Lights... The Drakness" [2000]
Street Date: 07/31/2000

Sometimes you look back and down
You have anyone
You want to try change things
But you ask to yourself if it’s late too much
After denying love ‘n understanding
You believe like something can back to you
Play with the ones who love you
Only break your soul and freeze your heart
*
[CHORUS]
A day I dreamed with you
And It was a beauty dream
The moon couldn’t make me dream that way
It’s so perfect to be
I have your picture in my mind
It was my heart which created it
A picture of you and I
In a far dream, I love and have...
*
I pray for this day come
‘Cause each day without you
It’s as I have all the sky and doesn’t have any star
It’s all I want
Be with you, it’s not ask too much...
*
[CHORUS]
Have you for one night only
It’s enough to die no suffering
Touch you once time only
It’s to know I knew live
Live one time to hold on you
It’s all I want, catch each star
Treat you as a queen and be your king
*
It’s everything to me
Be here and wait this day
When you’ll look at me
And you will love me as I love you


Submitted: September 20, 2009

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EdwardJBradleySr

Felipe Lima:

Interesting, well written and expressed. Heartfelt emotions.

Gave it an "I Like It" vote. As with your other posting.

Thank you for becoming a fan. Most appreciative.

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Sun, September 20th, 2009 8:27pm

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Thank you for your kind words and for the "I Like it" vote. I'm glad to see you like my work. And this one means a lot for since it was my first vote.

Sun, September 20th, 2009 5:13pm

Judd7

I could feel it!

Sun, September 20th, 2009 8:35pm

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I'm glad to hear that. Thanks for the commentary.

Sun, September 20th, 2009 5:14pm

Mistress of Word Play

A lovely song. I enjoyed it very much. Wish it were set to music. I am sure it would be beautiful.

Sun, September 20th, 2009 11:11pm

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Thanks for the kind commentary. The melody for this lyrics aren't done yet. However, I have an idea how it'd sound. This was one of my first "ballads" and I'm really glad to see you liked it too.

Sun, September 20th, 2009 5:17pm

rebekahBlaue

wow i liked it alot!

keep writing you're super good :]

Mon, September 21st, 2009 12:24am

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Thanks for the lovely comment.

Mon, September 21st, 2009 8:47am

Jelica

Oh, dear i like it very much.

Mon, September 21st, 2009 4:56pm

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Thanks. I'm glad you liked it :]

Mon, September 21st, 2009 12:00pm

dolejaly

Very well expressed! I thought it was very good.
Are you also a musician as well? I know some that write always write w/ a guitar in their hand....Once again very good writing...

Mon, September 21st, 2009 10:27pm

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Thanks so much for the comment. For now I can't play the guitar or the piano and for the reason I have a such hard time to compose the melody for my lyrics. But I'm thinking in take some classes to improve my work with such skills.

Wed, September 23rd, 2009 9:09am

William Russ

It's good, I know I've felt that way for sure in my lifetime.

Tue, September 22nd, 2009 3:17am

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Thanks for comment. And consider yourself a lucky one for have felt like that once. Best regards :]

Wed, September 23rd, 2009 9:11am

eddiecullenhata

Really good and interesting! I liked it :)

[Could you comment on my novel please? Thx]

Tue, September 22nd, 2009 9:36pm

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Thanks... Yeah, I'll check your novel.

Fri, September 25th, 2009 9:48pm

hhhh

This is a very good one, I really enjoyed it, everything that was meant to be expressed was and I really thought you did a well job! Do you sing out this? It would be cool to hear something from you as well, but for now, keep writing because it seems like you have a true art at it!

Tue, September 22nd, 2009 10:17pm

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Thank you for the kind words... I don't have any musical sample avaiable yet. But I'll post as soon as I have it.

Fri, September 25th, 2009 9:56pm

victirier

Awsomedude!Real cool lyrics!

Sat, September 26th, 2009 2:05pm

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Thanks for the kind comment :]

Sun, September 27th, 2009 10:15am

RachelAnn

That's really good. Great work(:

Sat, September 26th, 2009 4:59pm

Author
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Thanks for the lovely comment :]

Sun, September 27th, 2009 10:20am

TaylorShaeee

I enjoyed it, and it was written quite beautifully.

Sat, September 26th, 2009 5:31pm

Author
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Thx for the kind words... It means a lot to me :]

Sun, September 27th, 2009 10:29am

AliciaWow

Amazing.

It was very heartfelt and portrayed very goos emotions.

Sat, September 26th, 2009 9:34pm

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Thank you! :]

Sun, September 27th, 2009 10:34am

brit1315

I like it. Well done! :D

Sun, September 27th, 2009 3:16pm

Author
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Thanks so much for the comment :]

Sun, September 27th, 2009 10:43am

Graeme Montrose

Well done great poem

Tue, September 29th, 2009 12:37pm

Author
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Thanks for the kind words. :]

Sat, October 3rd, 2009 11:14am

Tiekoo

Love it very creative I wish I had your talent.
Very heart felt, is it a song you play by any chance?

Wed, September 30th, 2009 4:26pm

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Thank you very much for the lovely words Tiekoo. I'm really really thrilled that you enjoyed it. I don't have the song recorded but as soon as I have it I'll post for you. Thanks agian :D

Sat, October 3rd, 2009 3:14pm

Lolliepopangel16

You are an awsome song writter!!! I could never write a song as good as you!!!! sorry i don't know how to become your fan:( but if you tell me how then i will!! pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease comment on my work!!:):)

Mon, October 5th, 2009 4:11am

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Thanks for the kind words. I would love to see and comment your work. If you want to become a fan, just clik on the "become a fan" button on the top of the page, right next to the song title and image. Thanks again for the comment :]

Mon, October 5th, 2009 10:15am

Randall Stone

Hi Filipe, I loved the expressions and the raw emotion portrayed. It would be awsome set to music. I loved it.
God Bless,
Randall

Sat, October 10th, 2009 1:58am

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Thanks for the lovely comment, Randall. :]

Sun, October 11th, 2009 10:00pm

Princess Aqua

Hey I just loved this poem it really moved me, my brother's a musician as well but he doesn't write his own songs

Sat, October 10th, 2009 5:25pm

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Oh thanks for the lovely comment Princess! :]

Tue, October 13th, 2009 11:36pm

Zero Saint

This sounds like a song I would listen to, nice work man.

J.D. Caine

Mon, October 12th, 2009 4:39am

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Thanks for the comments J.D :]

Sat, October 24th, 2009 2:40pm

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